Haiku 102

Haiku 102
	
	
	pine needles whisper as they fall...  she whispered
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December 11, 2013 at 9:31 AM
interesting.... xox..Linda
Gorelick Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 9:11 PM
the end caught me by surprise..I love this. Bg
Jones Avatar
December 1, 2013 at 6:24 PM
Lovely Jack...took me to Colorado mountains in my memories
Dietrich Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 10:19 PM
this is so interesting to have "her" whispering this phrase! Clever one.
Jordan Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 10:24 PM
Thanks...
Andresen Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 5:14 PM
- ... Yes ..... so quiet .... that is beautiful, Jack! - Have a great weekend, dear friend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
Jordan Avatar
November 30, 2013 at 5:44 PM
Thank you, Anne-Lise, and a fine weekend to you as well... Jack
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