Haiku

fledgeling bluetits on birdtable being fed hope its suet
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Pigeon Tart Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 8:32 AM
I know what is wrong with that picture xomo
Talbot Avatar
June 8, 2018 at 12:12 PM
My first thought was that its there, then I look around the garden and the caterpillars, spiders etc are just not there. Note I have a small copse like garden trees and shrubs of many kinds. ick
Poteet Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:33 PM
an occasional rhyme doesn't hurt, does it?
Talbot Avatar
June 7, 2018 at 9:58 PM
I believe the guideline is that a haiku does not have to rhyme, not that it cannot. Hope that helps. Mick
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