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fledgeling bluetits on birdtable being fed hope its suet

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Date: 6/8/2018 8:32:00 AM
I know what is wrong with that picture xomo
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/8/2018 12:12:00 PM
My first thought was that its there, then I look around the garden and the caterpillars, spiders etc are just not there. Note I have a small copse like garden trees and shrubs of many kinds. ick
Date: 6/7/2018 9:33:00 PM
an occasional rhyme doesn't hurt, does it?
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Mick Talbot
Date: 6/7/2018 9:58:00 PM
I believe the guideline is that a haiku does not have to rhyme, not that it cannot. Hope that helps. Mick

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