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Haiku

Light

Dawn sends his light
Ripples of joy bloom inside
Prayers stir the hearts.


May 13th,. 2018

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Richard Lamoureux

June 4, 2018 at 8:32 AM

A lovely thought.

Besma Riabi Dziri

June 4, 2018 at 12:31 PM

I'm glad you take delight in my write. Humbled and pleased by your genuine comment. Thank you so much Richard. Stay safe.

Heidi Sands

May 16, 2018 at 1:32 AM

Very nicely written, and comforting :)

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 16, 2018 at 2:10 AM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment. Stay safe.

Susan Ashley

May 15, 2018 at 9:10 PM

Such a beautiful way to start each new day, dear Besma. Your deeply appreciative and spiritual haiku is uplifting in its inspiration and devotion. The light and joy of your heart and soul shine brilliantly through your stirring and prayerful poem. A superb haiku! Warmest wishes and love.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 16, 2018 at 2:08 AM

Always a great joy to read what you pen with warmth, love and insight.. You have a genuine ability to feel words and shape them generously.. I like reading your beauties and your elating feedbacks.. Bunches of thanks dear Susan, my respect and love. Shine with beauty and stay blessed.

Maria Williams

May 14, 2018 at 6:09 AM

I'm sure you have heard this countless times, but how do you manage to say so much in so few words? Brilliant my friend....Maria xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 14, 2018 at 6:47 AM

I sincerely appreciate your genuine words that add a lot of value to my humble words. I'm deeply grateful dear Maria. Stay tuned and blessed. Waiting impatiently to read your beauties.

Demetrios Trifiatis

May 13, 2018 at 11:27 AM

"Ripples" of poetry uplifting the soul dearest, Besma! Glorious write!

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 13, 2018 at 11:50 AM

Deeply humbled by your generous and praising feedback.. An evaluation I tremendously treasure! Bunches of thanks dear Demetrio. Stay blessed and safe.

Pandita Sietesantos

May 13, 2018 at 9:18 AM

A brilliant haiku with a wonderful spiritual message of faith and hope! Beautifully crafted, dear Besma! Hugs and love. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri

May 13, 2018 at 9:59 AM

Always honoured by your visits and elating feedbacks.. thank you so much for your valuable appreciation dear Pandita. My deep respect and love. Stay blessed.