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Light Dawn sends his light Ripples of joy bloom inside Prayers stir the hearts. May 13th,. 2018

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Richard Lamoureux

Date: 6/4/2018 8:32:00 AM

A lovely thought.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 6/4/2018 12:31:00 PM

I'm glad you take delight in my write. Humbled and pleased by your genuine comment. Thank you so much Richard. Stay safe.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/16/2018 1:32:00 AM

Very nicely written, and comforting :)

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/16/2018 2:10:00 AM

My pleasure! Thank you so much for your visit and lovely comment. Stay safe.

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/15/2018 9:10:00 PM

Such a beautiful way to start each new day, dear Besma. Your deeply appreciative and spiritual haiku is uplifting in its inspiration and devotion. The light and joy of your heart and soul shine brilliantly through your stirring and prayerful poem. A superb haiku! Warmest wishes and love.. ~Susan

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/16/2018 2:08:00 AM

Always a great joy to read what you pen with warmth, love and insight.. You have a genuine ability to feel words and shape them generously.. I like reading your beauties and your elating feedbacks.. Bunches of thanks dear Susan, my respect and love. Shine with beauty and stay blessed.

Maria Williams

Date: 5/14/2018 6:09:00 AM

I'm sure you have heard this countless times, but how do you manage to say so much in so few words? Brilliant my friend....Maria xxx

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/14/2018 6:47:00 AM

I sincerely appreciate your genuine words that add a lot of value to my humble words. I'm deeply grateful dear Maria. Stay tuned and blessed. Waiting impatiently to read your beauties.

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 5/13/2018 11:27:00 AM

"Ripples" of poetry uplifting the soul dearest, Besma! Glorious write!

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/13/2018 11:50:00 AM

Deeply humbled by your generous and praising feedback.. An evaluation I tremendously treasure! Bunches of thanks dear Demetrio. Stay blessed and safe.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/13/2018 9:18:00 AM

A brilliant haiku with a wonderful spiritual message of faith and hope! Beautifully crafted, dear Besma! Hugs and love. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/13/2018 9:59:00 AM

Always honoured by your visits and elating feedbacks.. thank you so much for your valuable appreciation dear Pandita. My deep respect and love. Stay blessed.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2018 6:40:00 AM

I see the light, feel the joy, and join the prayers..well crafted, inspirational haiku Besma.

Besma Riabi Dziri
Date: 5/13/2018 7:30:00 AM

I can feel the beauty of your soul and your adept to feel words.. Thank you dear Vijay for your warm visit and lovely comment.