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haiku perched on lily pads competing for a lover - a chorus of frogs 05-12-2018 Contest: haiga - haiku - Theme Summer - 5-7-5 Sponsor: Mick Talbot Placement: 3rd

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Warren Doll

Date: 7/30/2018 3:00:00 PM

This haiku is wonderful. Congrats on your win, Pandita

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2018 3:37:00 PM

Hi Warren, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you so much and hope all is well with you! Hugs. Pandita

Heidi Sands

Date: 6/7/2018 2:51:00 PM

This is so cute! Congratulations :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 7/30/2018 3:36:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind congratulatory words. Heidi! Hugs. Pandita

Line Gauthier

Date: 6/5/2018 8:50:00 PM

Lovely pen. Congrats on your win, Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/6/2018 10:45:00 AM

Hi Line, it's always great to hear from you and so encouraging! Thank you for your continued support! Hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/3/2018 5:17:00 PM

Back with my congrats. Yours was one of the most delightful.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/3/2018 6:28:00 PM

My dear Andie, your uplifting comments and compliments always make me happy! Thank you so very much for your continued support! Pandita

Susan Gentry

Date: 6/3/2018 1:01:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest with this true haiku. Enjoyed it!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/3/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thank you, dear Susan, for your superlative congratulatory compliments! Have a beautiful Sunday! Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/2/2018 12:25:00 PM

Back with congratulations Pandita. Tom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2018 8:22:00 PM

Hi Tom, thank you so much for swinging back with your congratulations which I dearly appreciate! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/2/2018 7:07:00 AM

- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2018 8:50:00 AM

Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for swinging back with your kind congratulatory words! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/1/2018 6:07:00 PM

hello my friend Pandita, your pore is cute.i just can see these frogs on the lily pad singing. A beautiful written poem.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2018 8:48:00 AM

Hi Darlene, thank you so much, my friend for your lovely compliments! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Harry Horsman

Date: 5/31/2018 5:26:00 PM

The 'Lilly pond' got talent, hope she picks the right male, Pandita, gem of a haiku..love it..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2018 8:45:00 AM

Hehehehe - with that kind of competition going, she has to be very descerning! Thanks, Harry and have a great weekend! Hugs. Pandita

Charlie Smith

Date: 5/31/2018 3:53:00 PM

Exactly the true natural beauty of Haikus, well done Pandita...

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 6/2/2018 8:43:00 AM

Hi Charlie, it's always great to hear from you! Thank you for your wonderful encouragement and support! Hugs. Pandita

Eve Roper

Date: 5/28/2018 7:59:00 PM

this is delightful, Pandita, with great imagery. It seems when it rains very heavy their musical melodies loudness :) Hugs eve

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/28/2018 9:41:00 PM

Thank you very much for your wonderful words, my sweet friend! Hugs. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/16/2018 9:31:00 AM

:0) fun to read again. Take care.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/16/2018 11:39:00 AM

Hi Richard, always glad to see you back again:-)! Have a nice day! Hugs. Pandita

Winged Warrior

Date: 5/16/2018 6:28:00 AM

Way cool haiku Pandita...ribbit, ribbit, ribbitly good...love and light...^WW^

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/16/2018 11:38:00 AM

Tehehehehe - Thank you - thank you, WW! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita

Charles Messina

Date: 5/15/2018 10:25:00 AM

Which one will turn into the prince is the question, the princess awaits! Lovely haiku Pandita, and don't forget...I toad you so! Hugs // Charlie

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/15/2018 10:31:00 AM

Tehehehe - Charlie, you are so "Prince Charmingly" funny!! I enjoyed your comment and thank you for your sweet compliment! Have a great day! Hugs. Pandita

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 5/15/2018 8:08:00 AM

Ribbit, ribbit, lovit!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/15/2018 8:30:00 AM

Hahahaha! Perfect compliments/comments, Richard - now I'm grinning! :-) Have a great day, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita

Anil Deo

Date: 5/15/2018 7:50:00 AM

this made me smile ... but the whales had the better surprise thus far. i loved line 2 in this haiku more .... write on, Pandita. shalom-shalom (Peace & wholeness as Ancient Hebrews prayed)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/15/2018 7:55:00 AM

Hi Anil, thank you for visiting once again! I'm glad it made you smile:-)! As always I appreciate hearing from you and receiving your valued feedback and support! Hugs. Pandita

Joseph May

Date: 5/14/2018 8:44:00 PM

Beautiful haiku Pandita..

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/15/2018 8:27:00 AM

Hi Joseph, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you so much and hope all is well with you! Hugs. Pandita

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/14/2018 6:43:00 PM

A cute image, Pandita!

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/15/2018 8:25:00 AM

Hi Andie, many thanks to you my friend, for your kind words and for taking the time to read my work! Warmest regards. Hugs. Pandita

Alexis Y.

Date: 5/14/2018 9:05:00 AM

Hi Pandita, You painted such a lovely picture in a few words. The theme "Love is air" was evident in this piece. PS, I hope you had an awesome Mother's Day:-) Alexis

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/14/2018 10:32:00 AM

Hi Alexis, it's so nice to hear from you, my friend! Thank you for your wonderful complimentary words that warmed my heart! I had a great Mother's Day and hope you did too! Love and hugs. Pandita

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/13/2018 12:20:00 PM

- A little romance in the summer, lovely haiku Pandita :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 12:43:00 PM

Thank you so much, my friend! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita

Daniel Turner

Date: 5/13/2018 11:50:00 AM

My kind of haiku, Pandita. Have you ever seen what a large mouth bass does when it sees the silhouette of a frog from beneath a lily pad. He explodes from the water engulfing lily pad and all. Happy Mother's Day, my pretty friend:)

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 12:51:00 PM

Daniel, you are just a wonderful person as well as a poet! I treasure your comments! Thank you for making me smile today with your sweet wishes for Mother's Day. Hugs. Pandita

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/13/2018 8:24:00 AM

Lovely image Pandita, when I was in Mauritius it was the frogs mating season, ill never forget the noise they made. Tom

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:02:00 AM

Oh yeah - they can keep their orchestra going:-)! Thanks for the visit and lovely compliment, Tom! Hugs. Pandita

Vijay Pandit

Date: 5/13/2018 6:53:00 AM

Perfectly captured sight and sound..a feature of a perfectly written haiku..great poetry in your words, as always Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:06:00 AM

Hi Vijay, thank you so much for your encouraging, superlative compliment! Have a relaxing day, my friend! Hugs. Pandita

Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 5/13/2018 2:37:00 AM

A cheerful read and a joyful imagery to start the day with! Always a pleasure to read your beauties. Stay bright and shiny dear Pandita.

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:08:00 AM

Dear Besma, I thank you for your wonderful complimentary words that warm my heart! Love and blessings. Pandita

Susan Ashley

Date: 5/12/2018 10:56:00 PM

Oh, such enchanting imagery, dear Pandita. Your wondrous haiku captures the moment perfectly. I can just hear the love songs in the night... Warmest wishes, lovely lady. ~Susan

Pandita Sietesantos
Date: 5/13/2018 9:10:00 AM

Hello Susan, thank you for your continued support and praises for my work which encourage me to keep writing and keep improving! Best wishes and love. Pandita