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perched on lily pads
competing for a lover -
a chorus of frogs





05-12-2018

Contest:     haiga - haiku - Theme Summer - 5-7-5 
Sponsor:     Mick Talbot
Placement:  3rd

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 7/30/2018 3:00:00 PM
This haiku is wonderful. Congrats on your win, Pandita
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 7/30/2018 3:37:00 PM
Hi Warren, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you so much and hope all is well with you! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/7/2018 2:51:00 PM
This is so cute! Congratulations :)
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Date: 7/30/2018 3:36:00 PM
Thank you very much for your kind congratulatory words. Heidi! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/5/2018 8:50:00 PM
Lovely pen. Congrats on your win, Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/6/2018 10:45:00 AM
Hi Line, it's always great to hear from you and so encouraging! Thank you for your continued support! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/3/2018 5:17:00 PM
Back with my congrats. Yours was one of the most delightful.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/3/2018 6:28:00 PM
My dear Andie, your uplifting comments and compliments always make me happy! Thank you so very much for your continued support! Pandita
Date: 6/3/2018 1:01:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in the summer haiku contest with this true haiku. Enjoyed it!
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Date: 6/3/2018 10:03:00 AM
Thank you, dear Susan, for your superlative congratulatory compliments! Have a beautiful Sunday! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/2/2018 12:25:00 PM
Back with congratulations Pandita. Tom
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/2/2018 8:22:00 PM
Hi Tom, thank you so much for swinging back with your congratulations which I dearly appreciate! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/2/2018 7:07:00 AM
- Congratulations on your Haiku with a great summer theme, Pandita :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:50:00 AM
Hello Anne-Lise, thank you for swinging back with your kind congratulatory words! Have a great weekend, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 6/1/2018 6:07:00 PM
hello my friend Pandita, your pore is cute.i just can see these frogs on the lily pad singing. A beautiful written poem.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 6/2/2018 8:48:00 AM
Hi Darlene, thank you so much, my friend for your lovely compliments! Hope you are enjoying the weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/31/2018 5:26:00 PM
The 'Lilly pond' got talent, hope she picks the right male, Pandita, gem of a haiku..love it..
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:45:00 AM
Hehehehe - with that kind of competition going, she has to be very descerning! Thanks, Harry and have a great weekend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/31/2018 3:53:00 PM
Exactly the true natural beauty of Haikus, well done Pandita...
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Date: 6/2/2018 8:43:00 AM
Hi Charlie, it's always great to hear from you! Thank you for your wonderful encouragement and support! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/28/2018 7:59:00 PM
this is delightful, Pandita, with great imagery. It seems when it rains very heavy their musical melodies loudness :) Hugs eve
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/28/2018 9:41:00 PM
Thank you very much for your wonderful words, my sweet friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/16/2018 9:31:00 AM
:0) fun to read again. Take care.
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Date: 5/16/2018 11:39:00 AM
Hi Richard, always glad to see you back again:-)! Have a nice day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/16/2018 6:28:00 AM
Way cool haiku Pandita...ribbit, ribbit, ribbitly good...love and light...^WW^
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Date: 5/16/2018 11:38:00 AM
Tehehehehe - Thank you - thank you, WW! Hope you are enjoying a beautiful day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/15/2018 10:25:00 AM
Which one will turn into the prince is the question, the princess awaits! Lovely haiku Pandita, and don't forget...I toad you so! Hugs // Charlie
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/15/2018 10:31:00 AM
Tehehehe - Charlie, you are so "Prince Charmingly" funny!! I enjoyed your comment and thank you for your sweet compliment! Have a great day! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/15/2018 8:08:00 AM
Ribbit, ribbit, lovit!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/15/2018 8:30:00 AM
Hahahaha! Perfect compliments/comments, Richard - now I'm grinning! :-) Have a great day, my friend! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/15/2018 7:50:00 AM
this made me smile ... but the whales had the better surprise thus far. i loved line 2 in this haiku more .... write on, Pandita. shalom-shalom (Peace & wholeness as Ancient Hebrews prayed)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/15/2018 7:55:00 AM
Hi Anil, thank you for visiting once again! I'm glad it made you smile:-)! As always I appreciate hearing from you and receiving your valued feedback and support! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/14/2018 8:44:00 PM
Beautiful haiku Pandita..
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Date: 5/15/2018 8:27:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I am delighted that you enjoyed reading this piece! Thank you so much and hope all is well with you! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/14/2018 6:43:00 PM
A cute image, Pandita!
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/15/2018 8:25:00 AM
Hi Andie, many thanks to you my friend, for your kind words and for taking the time to read my work! Warmest regards. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/14/2018 9:05:00 AM
Hi Pandita, You painted such a lovely picture in a few words. The theme "Love is air" was evident in this piece. PS, I hope you had an awesome Mother's Day:-) Alexis
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Date: 5/14/2018 10:32:00 AM
Hi Alexis, it's so nice to hear from you, my friend! Thank you for your wonderful complimentary words that warmed my heart! I had a great Mother's Day and hope you did too! Love and hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/13/2018 12:20:00 PM
- A little romance in the summer, lovely haiku Pandita :) - Best wishes in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/13/2018 12:43:00 PM
Thank you so much, my friend! Your compliments mean a lot to me! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/13/2018 11:50:00 AM
My kind of haiku, Pandita. Have you ever seen what a large mouth bass does when it sees the silhouette of a frog from beneath a lily pad. He explodes from the water engulfing lily pad and all. Happy Mother's Day, my pretty friend:)
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/13/2018 12:51:00 PM
Daniel, you are just a wonderful person as well as a poet! I treasure your comments! Thank you for making me smile today with your sweet wishes for Mother's Day. Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/13/2018 8:24:00 AM
Lovely image Pandita, when I was in Mauritius it was the frogs mating season, ill never forget the noise they made. Tom
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/13/2018 9:02:00 AM
Oh yeah - they can keep their orchestra going:-)! Thanks for the visit and lovely compliment, Tom! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/13/2018 6:53:00 AM
Perfectly captured sight and sound..a feature of a perfectly written haiku..great poetry in your words, as always Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/13/2018 9:06:00 AM
Hi Vijay, thank you so much for your encouraging, superlative compliment! Have a relaxing day, my friend! Hugs. Pandita
Date: 5/13/2018 2:37:00 AM
A cheerful read and a joyful imagery to start the day with! Always a pleasure to read your beauties. Stay bright and shiny dear Pandita.
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/13/2018 9:08:00 AM
Dear Besma, I thank you for your wonderful complimentary words that warm my heart! Love and blessings. Pandita
Date: 5/12/2018 10:56:00 PM
Oh, such enchanting imagery, dear Pandita. Your wondrous haiku captures the moment perfectly. I can just hear the love songs in the night... Warmest wishes, lovely lady. ~Susan
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Pandita Sanchez
Date: 5/13/2018 9:10:00 AM
Hello Susan, thank you for your continued support and praises for my work which encourage me to keep writing and keep improving! Best wishes and love. Pandita
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