haiku 101

the skies overhead
as airplanes come and depart
crisscrossing smoke trails

the smell of coffee
perking in the kitchen
wafting on the air
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Goldsmith Avatar
July 9, 2024 at 12:31 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful "haiku 101" write. I can smell the coffee. I like it iced in the summer...  Have a fun day writing away............
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July 15, 2024 at 12:43 PM
Thank Paula for reading my haiku. I have not been doing much in writing. Need to make more of an effort. love phyl
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