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white birch bark afloat on time’s tide paddles still ©4/28/2018

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Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 5/5/2018 9:41:00 AM

Wonderful! Congrats John :) xomo!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/2/2018 9:27:00 PM

Great imagery, John, congratulations on your win.. Hugs Eve

Md Johnson

Date: 5/2/2018 6:54:00 PM

Love the imagery. Congratulations!

Jack Webster

Date: 5/2/2018 6:35:00 PM

i love the choice of birch! the white color and peeling bark work so well with the time element. beautiful

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/2/2018 5:26:00 PM

Congrats for your win, John. A very nice image

Jan Allison

Date: 5/2/2018 4:49:00 PM

super Haiku John:-) Many congratulations on your win:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/2/2018 4:32:00 PM

Congrats on your top win, John.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/2/2018 4:14:00 PM

A lovely and peaceful presentation, John. Congratulations on placing first. Regards // paul

Susan Gentry

Date: 5/2/2018 3:31:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win! A great haiku.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/2/2018 1:32:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest, John :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Mick Talbot

Date: 5/2/2018 1:24:00 PM

Nearly not, couldn't make my mind up on still, as still moving or just still, decided both worked. So well paddled into a 1st, congratulations, John. Mick

John Lawless
Date: 5/2/2018 4:06:00 PM

Mick, I'm honored by the placement. I found the word "still" conveyed several meanings and possible interpretations....so I stuck with it.

Constance La France

Date: 5/1/2018 3:39:00 AM

John, oh this is wonderful, I was there floating on a forest lake somewhere listening . . . a sure winner (PS- please check your soupmail)