Haiku

evasive brown eyes
disguising fake love feeling
hidden with grin smile














For haiku poetry contest
Sponsored by Mick Talbot
April 24, 2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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May 15, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Nice
Rodrigues Avatar
May 14, 2018 at 9:40 PM
Love the adjectives! Nicely done!
DiMino Avatar
May 12, 2018 at 10:24 PM
A lot of wisdom in so few words. Congratulations!
Roper Avatar
May 1, 2018 at 7:42 PM
great imagery , Nayda, congratulations on your placement Hugs Eve ~`*
Dietrich Avatar
April 29, 2018 at 6:12 PM
Hey, Nayda. I wish I saw you around more! Congrats for your win here. I enjoyed seeing your human nature haiku.
De Beaulieu Avatar
April 28, 2018 at 8:17 PM
Hello Nayda,those words are so true. Have a nice evening my friend.
Mandani Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 5:47 PM
A very perceptive haiku.
Allison Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 2:07 PM
Many congratulations on your win in the haiku contest Nayda, we chose a similar theme:-) hugs Jan xx
Rodrigues Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 8:38 AM
Congrats!
Gentry Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 7:49 AM
Congratulations on your win. A unique haiku.
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2018 at 6:23 AM
- Congratulations on your great haiku, Nayda :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Gauthier Avatar
April 26, 2018 at 11:07 PM
Congrats on your win, Nayda. Well done.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2018 at 1:59 PM
- Bad behavior, Nayda - Well done - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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