Haiku

dive deep... daredevils 
           lanternfish... eels... vampire squid
                   darkness... luminesce

              
                         April 18, 2018

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Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 4/24/2018 8:50:00 AM

Oh the magnificent mysterious beasts of the deep! Splendid haiku dear poet. Congratulations on gold! xomo <3

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/24/2018 9:12:00 AM

Thank YOU, revered colleague. :) gw

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/23/2018 9:57:00 PM

Back for well deserved congrats on your gold medal win.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/24/2018 9:13:00 AM

Thank you, Line! :) gw

Laura Leiser

Date: 4/23/2018 7:50:00 PM

You covered a lot in your haiku, and it worked very well! Congrats on your win, Gershon :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 7:58:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words, Laura! :) gw

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2018 1:54:00 PM

- Congratulations on your 1st place in the haiku contest, Gershon :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 2:20:00 PM

Thank you for your sunny greeting, Anne-Lise!

Susan Gentry

Date: 4/23/2018 12:38:00 PM

I see you've been fishing... big one didn't get away :) Congratulations! A great haiku.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 1:12:00 PM

Thank you for the visit, your kind words, and for such an apt comparison, Susan. It's always an honor for me to read your kind words. :) Gershon

Mick Talbot

Date: 4/23/2018 9:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your gold medal win Gershon! Vampire squid just recently watched a program on these monsters of the deep, named after their colour, not their habit. Great haiku... Mick

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/23/2018 12:04:00 PM

Mick, I am grateful to you for the opportunity to really s-t-r-e-t-c-h my poetry-haiku skills that you gave me, and all of us Soupers, with this challenging contest. I worked very hard at it, and your notification of a 1st place finish brings joy to my heart and, yes, a trace of a tear to the corner of my eye...Thank you, thank you. Best wishes, Gershon

P.M. Richter

Date: 4/18/2018 10:43:00 PM

Great poem - Thank you for sharing.

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/19/2018 9:41:00 AM

---My privilege and pleasure. With supporters like yourself on Poetry Soup, I don't have to go 'fishing for compliments.' :) Gershon

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/18/2018 10:38:00 PM

A fun write, Gershon. You're not one for writing dull poetry. LOL

Line Gauthier
Date: 4/23/2018 9:57:00 PM

LOL well done

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/19/2018 9:38:00 AM

Thanks, Line! ---Sometimes I have to fish these out of muddy waters, mix up the ingredients, and then eventually out comes a 'fine kettle of fish.' :) gw

Eve Roper

Date: 4/18/2018 9:22:00 PM

Awesome Haiku, Gershon, luck in the contest! .. Hugs Eve ~`*

Gershon Wolf
Date: 4/18/2018 10:03:00 PM

Really, Really, Really appreciate your comment, Eve. I've been having so much difficulty with Haiku contests. I need all the encouragement and luck I can muster. From your mouth to the sponsor's ear! :) gw

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