Haiku

flirtatious clownfish 

tries to impress an angel --

    but loses his sole  






* Written April 17, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

April 27, 2018 at 7:33 PM

oh this is SO COOL. You should have put it in the fish contest. It would have been a sure bet.

Maria Williams

April 18, 2018 at 9:19 PM

Wow, what a witty and clever Haiku, I really love it, definitely a fave for me....Maria :). PS If this is for a contest, I see WINNER stamped all over it, however good luck Carolyn.

Carolyn Devonshire

April 20, 2018 at 7:28 PM

Not for a contest, just for fun. Thanks for reading, Maria!

Paul Callus

April 18, 2018 at 8:06 AM

Very much enjoyed this lovely clever witty poem, Carolyn! Wishing you a lovely day. Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire

April 20, 2018 at 7:28 PM

These fish are just sooo cute!

Tom Cunningham

April 18, 2018 at 4:27 AM

Love this one Carolyn, and the names of three fish included,great haiku. Good luck. Tom

Susan Ashley

April 17, 2018 at 8:57 PM

Poor flirtatious clownie, you can't always get what you want and sometimes you don't know what you've got till it's gone.. :) Your haiku is just scrumptious Carolyn. I love clown fish and I love your clever haiku! Warmest wishes. ~Susan