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flirtatious clownfish tries to impress an angel -- but loses his sole * Written April 17, 2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/27/2018 7:33:00 PM

oh this is SO COOL. You should have put it in the fish contest. It would have been a sure bet.

Maria Williams

Date: 4/18/2018 9:19:00 PM

Wow, what a witty and clever Haiku, I really love it, definitely a fave for me....Maria :). PS If this is for a contest, I see WINNER stamped all over it, however good luck Carolyn.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/20/2018 7:28:00 PM

Not for a contest, just for fun. Thanks for reading, Maria!

Paul Callus

Date: 4/18/2018 8:06:00 AM

Very much enjoyed this lovely clever witty poem, Carolyn! Wishing you a lovely day. Hugs // paul

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/20/2018 7:28:00 PM

These fish are just sooo cute!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 4/18/2018 4:27:00 AM

Love this one Carolyn, and the names of three fish included,great haiku. Good luck. Tom

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/17/2018 8:57:00 PM

Poor flirtatious clownie, you can't always get what you want and sometimes you don't know what you've got till it's gone.. :) Your haiku is just scrumptious Carolyn. I love clown fish and I love your clever haiku! Warmest wishes. ~Susan

Line Gauthier

Date: 4/17/2018 6:43:00 PM

Very clever, Carolyn.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/17/2018 7:24:00 PM

Thanks for reading, Line

Mystic Rose Rose

Date: 4/17/2018 3:26:00 PM

I love the sense of humor, short but very effective, poor fish.

Carolyn Devonshire
Date: 4/17/2018 3:27:00 PM

Thanks, Pixie.