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sweaty candy frog sunbathes on popsicle stick clings to cotton blouse For contest Haiku, sponsor Mick Talbot 14th March 2018

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Date: 3/16/2018 10:14:00 AM
lol nice!! I enjoyed this read!
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Date: 3/15/2018 7:57:00 PM
I'm giggling, Viv. So cute. Congratulations!
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Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/16/2018 4:49:00 AM
Lol...Viv! Every story needs a moral...
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:46:00 AM
Thanks, Rhoda. Moral of story- always eat candy frogs topless x
Date: 3/15/2018 6:17:00 PM
and Congratulations to YOU , my friend!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:46:00 AM
Thanks Andrea, muchos gracias x
Date: 3/15/2018 9:53:00 AM
Back with congratulations, Viv. Still hunting around for frog popsicles! Regards // paul
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:47:00 AM
Will have to send some homemade ones, Paul :)
Date: 3/15/2018 8:13:00 AM
The poor sweaty frog.....stuck there!! Congrats Viv.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:47:00 AM
Nothing worse than a fluff covered lolly, Jean x
Date: 3/15/2018 8:13:00 AM
Quite the sticky mess! Does he even care? Probably draws more flies! Delicious, dear! Congrats, Viv!
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Date: 3/16/2018 2:47:00 AM
Good point, hadn't thought of that, Kim. Viv x
Date: 3/15/2018 5:50:00 AM
VERY creative Mr Viv! Congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:48:00 AM
Thanks, Jan, love 'n hugs, Viv x
Date: 3/15/2018 4:05:00 AM
- Congratulations, Viv :) - An excellet 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/15/2018 3:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Viv. Regards,Sathya
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:48:00 AM
Thanks, Sathya, much appreciated . Regards, Viv
Date: 3/15/2018 1:26:00 AM
Congratulations, Viv on your win.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:48:00 AM
Cheers, Subimal, thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/14/2018 11:29:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Viv - blessings, my friend! :-)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:49:00 AM
Thanks, Gregory
Date: 3/14/2018 10:49:00 PM
Funny n cute.Congrats Viv to win.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:49:00 AM
Thanks, Anisha, always nice to get a visit from you x
Date: 3/14/2018 10:43:00 PM
Congratulations on your win Viv Tom.
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Date: 3/14/2018 8:51:00 PM
Congrats, Viv. That is one messy but fun haiku.
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 9:49:00 PM
Icky goo indeedy, Line, thanks x
Date: 3/14/2018 7:41:00 PM
That was the most difficult of all to judge, re those that got through to the third round, congratulations on your joint 2nd place Viv... Mick
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:14:00 PM
Thanks Mick, I wasn't sure how strict you'd be on mine since Haiku are nature related, but very kiind of you. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/14/2018 3:42:00 PM
I agree with some others down here. a darn creative picture and image!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:35:00 PM
Thanks Andrea, to be honest I was struggling to think of something really froggy :) x
Date: 3/14/2018 3:03:00 PM
Very creative, Viv! Your mind is always a step ahead:) Candy apart....once we used to buy small metal frogs which had some kind of spring underneath them that helped them jump after a few seconds of being placed firmly on the ground. Regards // paul
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:36:00 PM
Yes Paul, I remember those, they had a suction cup to provide that delay. Simple pleasures, eh? Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/14/2018 6:02:00 AM
Creative, clever!
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:36:00 PM
Thanks, Vijay, glad you like it. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/14/2018 2:09:00 AM
Great one Viv, get the wet wipes. Tom
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 3:27:00 AM
Thanks, Tom, couldn't think of anything really froggy, so went off piste. Regards, Viv
Date: 3/13/2018 10:27:00 PM
Great "Viv" humor! Love it :)
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 3:27:00 AM
Thanks, Laura, not so much a composition as a confection x
Date: 3/13/2018 9:06:00 PM
Love this "anti-nature" take, Viv. We've got to stick up for sticky, sweaty candy frogs. I imagine they're an endangered species by now...LOL! Great write! Best wishes, Gershon
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Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 3:28:00 AM
Judging by the local sweet shop near the school, virtually extinct, Gershon. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv