Haiku

sweaty candy frog 
    sunbathes on popsicle stick
    clings to cotton blouse


For contest Haiku, sponsor Mick Talbot
14th March 2018

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Edward Orozco

Date: 3/16/2018 10:14:00 AM

lol nice!! I enjoyed this read!

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/15/2018 7:57:00 PM

I'm giggling, Viv. So cute. Congratulations!

Rhoda Tripp
Date: 3/16/2018 4:49:00 AM

Lol...Viv! Every story needs a moral...

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:46:00 AM

Thanks, Rhoda. Moral of story- always eat candy frogs topless x

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/15/2018 6:17:00 PM

and Congratulations to YOU , my friend!

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:46:00 AM

Thanks Andrea, muchos gracias x

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2018 9:53:00 AM

Back with congratulations, Viv. Still hunting around for frog popsicles! Regards // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:47:00 AM

Will have to send some homemade ones, Paul :)

Jean Murray

Date: 3/15/2018 8:13:00 AM

The poor sweaty frog.....stuck there!! Congrats Viv.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:47:00 AM

Nothing worse than a fluff covered lolly, Jean x

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/15/2018 8:13:00 AM

Quite the sticky mess! Does he even care? Probably draws more flies! Delicious, dear! Congrats, Viv!

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:47:00 AM

Good point, hadn't thought of that, Kim. Viv x

Jan Allison

Date: 3/15/2018 5:50:00 AM

VERY creative Mr Viv! Congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:48:00 AM

Thanks, Jan, love 'n hugs, Viv x

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2018 4:05:00 AM

- Congratulations, Viv :) - An excellet 2nd place in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sathya Babu

Date: 3/15/2018 3:52:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Viv. Regards,Sathya

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:48:00 AM

Thanks, Sathya, much appreciated . Regards, Viv

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/15/2018 1:26:00 AM

Congratulations, Viv on your win.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:48:00 AM

Cheers, Subimal, thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/14/2018 11:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Viv - blessings, my friend! :-)

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thanks, Gregory

Anisha Dutta

Date: 3/14/2018 10:49:00 PM

Funny n cute.Congrats Viv to win.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/16/2018 2:49:00 AM

Thanks, Anisha, always nice to get a visit from you x

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/14/2018 10:43:00 PM

Congratulations on your win Viv Tom.

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/14/2018 8:51:00 PM

Congrats, Viv. That is one messy but fun haiku.

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 9:49:00 PM

Icky goo indeedy, Line, thanks x

Mick Talbot

Date: 3/14/2018 7:41:00 PM

That was the most difficult of all to judge, re those that got through to the third round, congratulations on your joint 2nd place Viv... Mick

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:14:00 PM

Thanks Mick, I wasn't sure how strict you'd be on mine since Haiku are nature related, but very kiind of you. Regards, Viv

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/14/2018 3:42:00 PM

I agree with some others down here. a darn creative picture and image!

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:35:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, to be honest I was struggling to think of something really froggy :) x

Paul Callus

Date: 3/14/2018 3:03:00 PM

Very creative, Viv! Your mind is always a step ahead:) Candy apart....once we used to buy small metal frogs which had some kind of spring underneath them that helped them jump after a few seconds of being placed firmly on the ground. Regards // paul

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:36:00 PM

Yes Paul, I remember those, they had a suction cup to provide that delay. Simple pleasures, eh? Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/14/2018 6:02:00 AM

Creative, clever!

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 8:36:00 PM

Thanks, Vijay, glad you like it. Regards, Viv

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/14/2018 2:09:00 AM

Great one Viv, get the wet wipes. Tom

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 3:27:00 AM

Thanks, Tom, couldn't think of anything really froggy, so went off piste. Regards, Viv

Laura Leiser

Date: 3/13/2018 10:27:00 PM

Great "Viv" humor! Love it :)

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 3:27:00 AM

Thanks, Laura, not so much a composition as a confection x

Gershon Wolf

Date: 3/13/2018 9:06:00 PM

Love this "anti-nature" take, Viv. We've got to stick up for sticky, sweaty candy frogs. I imagine they're an endangered species by now...LOL! Great write! Best wishes, Gershon

Viv Wigley
Date: 3/14/2018 3:28:00 AM

Judging by the local sweet shop near the school, virtually extinct, Gershon. Thanks for dropping by. Regards, Viv

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