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male frog's loud ribbet attracts female attention tadpoles hatch in pond haiku contest sponsored by Mick Talbot 5-7-5 checked with how many syllables 3/11/18

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 3/27/2018 5:29:00 AM

Very nice poem here. Very naturally good. ^_^Ribbit - haha ~JWE

Jan Allison
Date: 3/27/2018 6:34:00 AM

Thanks so much David, so lovely to see you my friend:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2018 4:27:00 PM

It's all about those baby tadpoles!! Home now for the day and Andie Pandie's gonna play (I'll binge watch A Handmaid's Tale on Netflix)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2018 7:21:00 PM

enjoy Andie pandie lol- gee that takes me back I can hear the theme music in my head lol:-) hugs jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/17/2018 4:26:00 PM

oh , yours was like mine. REmember the old line I was gonna use? hahaha. Congrats. I am glad to finally see your frog KU

Jan Allison
Date: 3/17/2018 7:20:00 PM

Thanks Andrea:-) hugs jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2018 10:38:00 PM

I thought I wrote on your poem ? I see i didn't :( Wonderful imagery in your poem, Jan, and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2018 5:16:00 AM

You did comment Eve I remember reading it:-( hugs jan xx

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/15/2018 7:58:00 PM

Back with congratulations! Awesomeness!

Jan Allison
Date: 3/16/2018 5:15:00 AM

Thanks Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2018 10:34:00 AM

The loud ribbetting now turns into a lullaby, Jan! Congratulations on your fine win. Hugs // paul

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 12:01:00 PM

Thanks Paul I was pleased to be on the winners list:-) hugs Jan xx

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 3/15/2018 8:17:00 AM

A lovely scene with the star...Prince Charming! ;) Congrats, Jan! Hugs...Kim

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Kim:-) hugs Jan xx

Jean Murray

Date: 3/15/2018 8:14:00 AM

Really good Jan. A ribbiting romance. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 12:00:00 PM

Thanks Jean:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/15/2018 4:11:00 AM

- An excellet 3rd place in the contest Jan, congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Anne-Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Subimal Sinha-Roy

Date: 3/15/2018 1:27:00 AM

Congratulations, Jan on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Subimal:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 3/14/2018 11:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win, Jan - so charming - blessings, my friend! :-) <3

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 11:59:00 AM

Thanks Greg:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/14/2018 10:47:00 PM

Congratulations Jan. Tom

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 11:58:00 AM

thanks Tom:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/14/2018 8:57:00 PM

Well done, Jan. Congrats on your win.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 11:57:00 AM

thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Viv Wigley

Date: 3/14/2018 8:45:00 PM

Congrats, Jan. Where did you find that picture of me in the bath? Viv x

Jan Allison
Date: 3/15/2018 11:57:00 AM

hee hee am not telling Mr Viv:-) hugs jan xx

Susan Ashley

Date: 3/14/2018 9:43:00 AM

Aw, awesome haiku Jan! Best wishes for a win..

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thanks Susan:-) hugs jan xx

Joanna Daniel

Date: 3/13/2018 9:21:00 AM

Ha ha, nice one, Jan:)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/14/2018 10:03:00 AM

Thanks Jo:-) hugs jan xx

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/12/2018 8:25:00 AM

Ha ha, love it. I see you leapfrogging to the top of the winner board.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:10:00 PM

Lovely comment thanks Richard:-) hugs Jan xx

Pat Adams

Date: 3/12/2018 8:13:00 AM

Frog love! Gotta love it! Love the Gif as well. Well done!.............80)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:11:00 PM

thanks Pat:-) hugs Jan xx

Tom Cunningham

Date: 3/12/2018 4:04:00 AM

This contest is certainly bringing out the Kermit in us lol. Good luck Jan.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:11:00 PM

I wanted to do a haiku about kermit croaking lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/12/2018 1:48:00 AM

- ... love in the air ... I mean in the pond :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - I wish you a wonderful new week, Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:12:00 PM

thanks Anne Lise:-) hugs Jan xx

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 3/11/2018 8:07:00 PM

Awesomely cute Jan! Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:12:00 PM

thanks so much Che:-) hugs Jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 3/11/2018 7:33:00 PM

Good one, Jan. Well done.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:12:00 PM

thanks Line:-) hugs Jan xx

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 3/11/2018 6:58:00 PM

Awwww...love this Jan. I so love the sounds of spring on a pond.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/12/2018 1:13:00 PM

thanks so much Rhoda:-) hugs Jan xx

Agnes Krampe

Date: 3/11/2018 6:36:00 PM

I like this one, Jan. It's snowing here, but the spring peepers had been peeping already.

Jan Allison
Date: 3/11/2018 6:37:00 PM

oh gosh Agnes stay indoors and keep warm.:-) hugs Jan xx