Haiku

a frog's leap in pond
            radiates ripples of joy
             a bond beyond pond


11-Mar-2018
Contest: haiku
Sponsored by: Mick Talbot

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Eve Roper

March 15, 2018 at 10:46 PM

Wonderful imagery in your poem, Sathya , and written very well. Congratulations on your win! Hugs ~`*

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 11:01 PM

Thanks for the visit and comments Eve.....:-) Regards,Sathya

Andrea Dietrich

March 15, 2018 at 7:06 PM

Really nice one. I hope it scored high! Congrats !!

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 11:00 PM

Thank You Andrea......Regards, Sathya

Paul Callus

March 15, 2018 at 10:05 AM

Nicely expressed, Sathya...now the ripples of congrats come your way:) Congratulations! Regards // paul

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 11:00 PM

Thanks a Lot Paul.....:-) Regards,Sathya

Jean Murray

March 15, 2018 at 8:06 AM

This haiku radiates joy too Sathya. I love it.

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 9:15 AM

Thank You Jean :-). Nice to hear to love it. Regards,Sathya

Jan Allison

March 15, 2018 at 5:46 AM

Lovely haiku, Sathya Many congrats :-) hugs jan xx

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 9:15 AM

Thanks Jan. Regards,Sathya

Anne-Lise Andresen

March 15, 2018 at 4:03 AM

- An excellet 1st place in the contest ~ Congratulations, Sathya :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 4:07 AM

Anne-Lise: Thanks for the comments and support. ..:-) Regards,Sathya

Tom Cunningham

March 15, 2018 at 2:45 AM

Congratulations Sathya. Tom

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:33 AM

Thanks Tom for the visit and Wishes...:-) Regards, Sathya

Subimal Sinha-Roy

March 15, 2018 at 1:24 AM

Congratulations, a great inspiring haiku.

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:34 AM

Thank You Subimal Regards, Sathya

Gregory Richard Barden

March 14, 2018 at 11:27 PM

Congratulations on your win, Sathya - blessings, my friend! :-)

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:30 AM

Thanks a Lot for these Wishes and Blessings ..: -) Regards,Sathya

Kim Rodrigues

March 14, 2018 at 10:38 PM

Love the rippling! Congrats, Sathyu!

Line Gauthier

March 14, 2018 at 8:42 PM

Charming poem. Congrats on your top win, Sathya.

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:29 AM

Thank You Line.....:-) Regards, Sathya

Viv Wigley

March 14, 2018 at 8:26 PM

Nicely done,Sathya, love the last line rhyme, too. Congrats! Viv

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:28 AM

Thanks a Lot Viv.....:-) Regards, Sathya

Mick Talbot

March 14, 2018 at 7:27 PM

That was the most difficult of all to judge, re those that got through to the third round, congratulations on your joint 1st place Sathya... Mick

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:27 AM

Thanks Mick for the opportunity. Thanks for organizing this contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

March 14, 2018 at 7:09 PM

This is a superb haiku Sathya! Your last line gives it that aha moment! Bravo on your wonderful First Placement! : )

Sathya Babu

March 15, 2018 at 3:26 AM

Thank You Connie. Thank You for you comments and support..:-)

FJ Thomas

March 11, 2018 at 6:48 PM

Very nice Sathya :)

Sathya Babu

March 13, 2018 at 8:21 AM

Thank YOU!!!

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