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Haiku 1-2-3 Or 3-2-1 Series

whippoorwill
trills a
song

larks
in trees
sing along

croaking frogs
join the
throng

then
crickets
chirp with ease

symphony
on the
breeze

Sept. 27. 2018 
for the Haiku 1-2-3 Or 3-2-1 Poetry Contest of charles messina

naturesoundhaiku

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P.S. Awtry

Date: 10/22/2018 1:12:00 AM

very lovely :)

Eve Roper

Date: 10/10/2018 8:27:00 PM

Great string of Haiku, Andrea, congratulations on your win. <3

Augustus Black

Date: 10/10/2018 6:45:00 AM

Super Haikus Andrea... Congratulation for the win.

Joanna Daniel

Date: 10/9/2018 10:22:00 PM

This is a wonderful winner, Andrea:)

Charles Messina

Date: 10/9/2018 6:20:00 PM

I love this one Andrea, great take on this new form. Congratulations on your win in my contest and thank you for entering. Hugs Charlie :)

Jan Allison

Date: 10/9/2018 5:19:00 PM

absolutely gorgeous Andrea such lovely imagery which appeals to my senses:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 10/9/2018 2:42:00 PM

Beautiful harmony, Andrea. Lovely poem. Congrats on your top win.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 10/9/2018 11:34:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great haiku, Andrea :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Warren Doll

Date: 10/9/2018 9:57:00 AM

Very creative haiku, Andrea. Congratulations on your win. ~Warren

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/28/2018 7:04:00 AM

This is brilliant Andrea. I never got past creating even one. It is almost 2am and I have been having so many problems with the ads blocking by view I can't read the poems. I hope they can fix it soon. I know this will be high on the winner's list! : )

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 9/28/2018 6:36:00 AM

I love it. You're playing my favourite song Andrea. I SO miss the sound of the whippoorwill. Good luck in the contest! xomo

Rhona Mcferran

Date: 9/27/2018 9:15:00 PM

This is brilliant- Love the flow of this, and can practically hear it in my head! ;) Wonderfully penned!

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 9/27/2018 7:32:00 PM

Andrea, your poems are like reading song lyrics! I think you could make a fortune in the music industry, my dear.

Andrea Dietrich
Date: 9/27/2018 8:17:00 PM

that was so nice of you to say, Caren. I've always felt that what I lack in imaginative imagery i make up for with meter!

Agnes Krampe

Date: 9/27/2018 5:31:00 PM

This is beautiful. I love short poems that are distilled to the essentials.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/27/2018 5:22:00 PM

Excellent haiku imagery Andrea..best for a win in the contest.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 9/27/2018 4:55:00 PM

this is lovely, andrea! best of luck in the contest...

Matthew Anish

Date: 9/27/2018 4:38:00 PM

Stimulating work here. New type of short poem is good to see! The rhymes are clever. In Brooklyn - where I went for a reading last night - we devised the 9 1 1 poem. Peace & Love Matthew Anish