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Haiku 01

deer footprints in fresh fallen snow... poacher stalks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/6/2012 12:05:00 PM
I hope the poacher gets caught and the deer escapes.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:49:00 AM
I agree with you on that one.
Date: 2/3/2012 11:25:00 AM
I just saw john's comment. Easy to follow!!
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Date: 2/3/2012 11:24:00 AM
oh, goodie I see you have a trail of haiki for ME to stalk!! This one starting out is just great.
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:49:00 AM
head still cloudy but trying to get something out there
Date: 2/1/2012 10:44:00 AM
easy to follow
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:50:00 AM
yeah no problem in the snow
Date: 1/31/2012 11:31:00 AM
Good Phyllis,wery good!oxox love Anne-Lise
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Phyllis Babcock
Date: 2/7/2012 9:50:00 AM
Thank you Anne Lise

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