Haiku 01

deer footprints
in fresh fallen snow...
poacher stalks
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Pettit Avatar
February 6, 2012 at 12:05 PM
I hope the poacher gets caught and the deer escapes.
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:49 AM
I agree with you on that one.
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 11:25 AM
I just saw john's comment. Easy to follow!!
Dietrich Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 11:24 AM
oh, goodie I see you have a trail of haiki for ME to stalk!! This one starting out is just great.
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:49 AM
head still cloudy but trying to get something out there
Loving Iii Avatar
February 1, 2012 at 10:44 AM
easy to follow
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:50 AM
yeah no problem in the snow
Andresen Avatar
January 31, 2012 at 11:31 AM
Good Phyllis,wery good!oxox love Anne-Lise
Babcock Avatar
February 7, 2012 at 9:50 AM
Thank you Anne Lise
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