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Haiku 001

a distant bell tolls
in ground shaking momenta
soft clouds drift on by.

© Harry J Horsman 2012

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Faye Gibson

Date: 8/27/2014 8:26:00 PM

Great job, Harry; beautiful images. Congrats on your win.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/26/2014 5:17:00 PM

I'm glad to see this gorgeous haiku got a high placement. CONGRATS

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 8/25/2014 5:01:00 AM

Beautiful expression creating a scene with apt images, harry. congrats

Casarah Nance

Date: 8/24/2014 8:01:00 PM

sounds relaxing I imagine laying down in a grassy field by a church watching the sky. grats on your win ;)

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 8/24/2014 3:58:00 PM

Harry, please accept my huge congratulations for taking this wonderful win in the contest! Excellent write, my friend! Well-deserved! Pandita

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/24/2014 3:30:00 PM

A lovely way in displaying a soft flowing shadow, at a distant. Harry, Congratulations, thank you for supporting my contest "IN THE CLOUDS!" Take care and enjoy my blog, "Pillow Fights" If you like or have the time. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Elenushka Toledo

Date: 12/17/2012 6:54:00 AM

So soft!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 11/24/2012 5:31:00 PM

I still haven't got the hang of these, I will just have to live vicariously through you.

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 11/23/2012 9:01:00 AM

YEAH! haiku!! just drop the capital [A] and the period!!! [aww Harry i have so much heart I have to stay inside away from people grrr I can't ahndle large groups at all! Thank you I think you were saying you see my heart?..hopefull I didn't embarress our friend I took his name off!..really it was to all poets!] Light & Love

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/23/2012 8:43:00 AM

Xox..pd

Bl Devnath

Date: 11/22/2012 8:28:00 AM

The bell of disaster rings from distant, heard by no one and goes on. When danger shakes life, recovers gradually there after. I feel from this wonderful poem. Am I right? Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/21/2012 6:14:00 PM

Can't believe nobody else has seen this one except me yet. So did you google Heloise and Abelard? You have to read their story, Harry! It's incredible what they went through.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/19/2012 10:37:00 PM

this is GORGEOUS, Harry!!!!

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