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Haiku- A Home Picnic

pies on tartan rugs before Spring dandelions bloom - early yard picnic

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Date: 1/13/2017 10:58:00 AM
A perfect haiku. Much love x
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:50:00 AM
Such a delightful haiku. Just right!
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Date: 1/9/2017 8:34:00 AM
A delightful haiku Charmaine. Hugs Rick
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2017 8:54:00 AM
Thanks for reading Richard.:)
Date: 1/9/2017 6:14:00 AM
A beautiful Haiku that creates such a magical setting in the mind. I read some comments/replies below...a picnic in the yard with your daughter, these experience are what make our memories bloom.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2017 7:03:00 AM
Yes sometimes We do that..especially when its a good Winter's day.Im Summer We usually do bbqs on d roof..and in Spring or Autumn We do real picnics..in fields..I love simple things.Thanks for reading Chris.
Date: 1/8/2017 5:19:00 PM
this is adorable. I can just picture it with you and your precious little girl!
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2017 7:00:00 AM
Oh yes ..Its much fun when we do it..Kids are happy with simple things indeed .: )
Date: 1/8/2017 2:07:00 PM
Yummm pie! Cherry? It's a nice day here but too cool for picnic. Sounds wonderful though, Charmaine.
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/8/2017 2:13:00 PM
Cherry pie is delicious ...Its something I do with my little girl sometimes...Too cold on the isle too :) .
Date: 1/8/2017 2:05:00 PM
Lovely imagery Charma mmm some pie on the patio sounds lovely but sadly its too cold here for that:-( hugs Jan xx
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/8/2017 2:11:00 PM
Here its cold too dear Jan..Its something I sometimes do with Christina though in our back yard..Pretending we are making a picnic..with pies and a tartan rug...At times we pretend our yard is a restaurant..then that means red table cloth and make pretend menus : ).Tnks for reading.
Date: 1/8/2017 1:55:00 PM
Wish it was warm enough for a picnic. We didn't even hit 0 farenheit here today...I could go for some peach pie : )
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Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/8/2017 2:12:00 PM
Its something I sometimes did with Christina... Its very cold here too..Peach pie sounds yummy.: )