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Haiku- a Home Picnic

pies on  tartan rugs

before Spring dandelions bloom

- early yard picnic

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Aarushi Pandey

Date: 1/13/2017 10:58:00 AM

A perfect haiku. Much love x

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 1/9/2017 8:50:00 AM

Such a delightful haiku. Just right!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/9/2017 8:34:00 AM

A delightful haiku Charmaine. Hugs Rick

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2017 8:54:00 AM

Thanks for reading Richard.:)

Chris Green

Date: 1/9/2017 6:14:00 AM

A beautiful Haiku that creates such a magical setting in the mind. I read some comments/replies below...a picnic in the yard with your daughter, these experience are what make our memories bloom.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2017 7:03:00 AM

Yes sometimes We do that..especially when its a good Winter's day.Im Summer We usually do bbqs on d roof..and in Spring or Autumn We do real picnics..in fields..I love simple things.Thanks for reading Chris.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/8/2017 5:19:00 PM

this is adorable. I can just picture it with you and your precious little girl!

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/9/2017 7:00:00 AM

Oh yes ..Its much fun when we do it..Kids are happy with simple things indeed .: )

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/8/2017 2:07:00 PM

Yummm pie! Cherry? It's a nice day here but too cool for picnic. Sounds wonderful though, Charmaine.

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/8/2017 2:13:00 PM

Cherry pie is delicious ...Its something I do with my little girl sometimes...Too cold on the isle too :) .

Jan Allison

Date: 1/8/2017 2:05:00 PM

Lovely imagery Charma mmm some pie on the patio sounds lovely but sadly its too cold here for that:-( hugs Jan xx

Charmaine Chircop
Date: 1/8/2017 2:11:00 PM

Here its cold too dear Jan..Its something I sometimes do with Christina though in our back yard..Pretending we are making a picnic..with pies and a tartan rug...At times we pretend our yard is a restaurant..then that means red table cloth and make pretend menus : ).Tnks for reading.