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Haiku--C

Cherries in a bowl cavort with one another stops when I swallow Copyright McCuen 2009

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Date: 1/6/2009 2:39:00 PM
Thanks for allowing me to smile with this one. Nice use of personification. I enjoyed it. Thank you also for your kind comments on my poetry. Keep on writing! Karen
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Date: 1/3/2009 2:06:00 AM
Nice way of ending that one...Raul
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Date: 1/1/2009 9:04:00 AM
MC - I reckon thats one way to shut them up - God Bless, MJ
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