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Haiku, I Love U

a deluge of love
drowns in a passionate smile
as she walks on by

© Harry J Horsman  2018

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Larry Logan

Date: 7/22/2018 5:13:00 PM

Beautiful. It just is.

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 5/30/2018 7:50:00 AM

Harry, you continue to lead the way - what a wonderful haiku! I am truly impressed with your amazing talent. You make it seem so easy, while I still struggle with trying to perfect this form. So I am taking notes from your awesome pieces! BRAVO and belated congratulations to you! Hugs. Pandita

Carol B.

Date: 1/29/2018 9:07:00 PM

Wow! This is going into my favs :).

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/22/2018 6:37:00 PM

Way to go Harry! Congrats.

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/21/2018 12:58:00 PM

Hi Harry, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your winning write. It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/20/2018 4:52:00 PM

Congrats on your great win. One sided love just doesn't work out does it. I wonder if that smile was ever rewarded? Thanks for the visits to my page..Sara

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 1/20/2018 12:35:00 PM

Packs a punch of emotion, fantastic ink Harry. Congratulations on your win! xomo

Line Gauthier

Date: 1/20/2018 10:11:00 AM

Adorable haiku. Superbly done, Harry. Congrats on your well deserved win.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/20/2018 7:25:00 AM

A real beauty! Congrats!

Eve Roper

Date: 1/19/2018 9:17:00 PM

Beautiful, Harry, congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve

Gregory Richard Barden

Date: 1/19/2018 7:02:00 PM

Congratulations, Harry - wonderful Haiku! :-)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/19/2018 6:56:00 PM

I'm VERY glad to see your haiku scored so high. It was one of my favorites! Congrats, my friend.

CayCay Jennings

Date: 1/19/2018 6:29:00 PM

Congratulations! I loved yours the moment I read it, glad it was acknowledged. All the best ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 1/19/2018 4:13:00 PM

Dropping back with my congrats harry:-) hugs Jan xx

Vijay Pandit

Date: 1/19/2018 3:00:00 PM

Congrats harry--well done, friend.

Charlie Smith

Date: 1/19/2018 1:57:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Harry, well done...

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 1/19/2018 1:47:00 PM

This is so lovely Harry. Congratulations on your wonderful Second placement! : )

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/16/2018 6:34:00 PM

Hi Harry, This is a good entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck in the contest. Thanks for stopping by my page:-) Alexis

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 1/16/2018 4:28:00 PM

One of my favorites so far for the contest Harry.

Paul Callus

Date: 1/16/2018 1:18:00 PM

A smile can work wonders, Harry! I believe that both you and Richard L. have been looking at the same woman:) Regards // paul

Richard Lamoureux
Date: 1/16/2018 4:29:00 PM

Ha ha, I just read your comment Paul. She's quite the woman.

Cheryl Hoffman

Date: 1/16/2018 8:19:00 AM

Love the word play in this awesome clever haiku Harry; Good luck in the contest!~Che :)

Rhoda Tripp

Date: 1/15/2018 7:54:00 PM

Harry! This is awesome! Such a beautiful snapshot in my mind from only 17 syllables. Great job!

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 1/14/2018 3:35:00 AM

a deluge of love in that smile I'm sure xx

Maria Williams

Date: 1/13/2018 11:35:00 PM

A smile can say so many things Harry. Love this one of yours. Great imagery...Maria

Susan Ashley

Date: 1/13/2018 10:09:00 PM

Oh so beautiful Harry. Fantastic adrenaline rush romantic imagery. Love it and best wishes for the contest.. ~Susan

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