Haikai - Haiku - Tanka

haikai ********** Summertime Theme summertime sunshine finds a gap in the curtain lights up my true love the summer sun burns respite clouds shadows much needed rain we all enjoy fun summer holidays no rain we all pay the price hosepipe ban will come flora fauna begging drinks worms now out of reach black headed gulls tap dancing mimicking rain nothing there to fool summertime its joy can become cries for help don't forget cream up ducks waddle bare beds dried up rivers lakes and ponds keep your bird baths filled ******************* A TANKA WARNING mums remember do not lose your children make them prisoners for indeed the sun takes none take sun in doses... not one *****************************
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July 6, 2018 at 9:43 PM
Mick.. I'm impressed with your Haiku train and Tanka caboose!
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July 7, 2018 at 6:19 AM
Many thanks for your kind words L.M., appreciated your appreciation, Mick
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July 6, 2018 at 6:28 AM
Enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for the honor of placing in your contest. I was delighted to see the win. Sara
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July 6, 2018 at 7:06 AM
Its an honour for me that you entered the contest, and my pleasure to read, thank you, for your kind words too, Mick
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