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12/05/24

 

 

 

 

 

 

At early dawn, me lying supine on my non - mowed lawn in happy mood. I am relaxing under bright Sun and clean clear cerulean sky enjoying morning beauty of environ. Cheerful sparrows and sterlings to chirp and prance. Morning dews are glistening on wild glass blades. Swift squirrel is climbing up and coming down. Slow snail is crawling silent with single foot. In gentle breeze, tiny feral flowers are nodding heads in fun. Everything is running smooth and fine in fresh morning. Fluttering wings flying butterflies are visiting blossoms. Cute kittens are playing joyfully at a corner. I am sensing serene sublime ecstatic state. Suddenly a grass hopper settles on tip of grass. A prompt chameleon doesn’t miss the chance to attack and swallows up. My heavenly bliss at once turns in melancholy sinking in hell. nature acts ruthless ~ prey and predator to run simultaneous.

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Date: 12/5/2024 5:56:00 AM
Very well-crafted Haibun, Anitha, portraying the force of nature exquisitely, best of luck in the contest.
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Anisha Dutta
Date: 12/5/2024 9:09:00 PM
Thank you , Dear Poet Blessings and Regards.

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