Richard Palmer Poet Rhyme

Hah Ha Hah Holloween Night

Fingers,the bones,
     Force through a casket,
A body appears,
     Or should I say,what's left,
Groans and moans,
      Earth bursting all around,
Covering my ears,
      Shutting out this horrible sound,
Countless dead,
      Raising from the ground,
In your chest,
      Twice as fast your heart pound,
Searching for the living,
       This Halloween night,
Better not be caught,
        It won't be a wonderful sight....

Creepy,scary,laugh,hah,ha,hah...

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Brittany Reynolds November 2, 2012 at 8:16 PM Spooky. I never did like zombies. They're too hard to kill. Good poem. Hope you survived the undead. :) Richard Palmer November 7, 2012 at 6:04 AM thanks Brittany,I did just getting out of the closet,lol

Robert Johnson October 23, 2012 at 4:10 PM It seems, theres a bit of the macabre running through your veins. I guess halloween has that affect on us. Don't eat too much candy. Richard Palmer October 23, 2012 at 5:11 PM I won't Robert,lol,thanks

Lynn Dolly October 23, 2012 at 5:48 AM Love it! Seems I can learn a lot about poetry from you:) Richard Palmer October 23, 2012 at 7:30 AM lol,thanks much Sharon,ok,first homework read a few more and catch the flow,lol

Shaz Cheesman October 20, 2012 at 7:36 AM I think of Michael Jackson 'Thriller' music clip when i read your poem Richard lol - Shaz :) Richard Palmer October 20, 2012 at 5:12 PM lol,thanks Shaz

Harry Horsman October 19, 2012 at 3:15 PM scary one Richard, just love those zombie poems, and this is one of the best.... Richard Palmer October 20, 2012 at 5:00 PM thanks Harry scared myself,lol

Kathryn Collins October 19, 2012 at 9:24 AM Richard - Goulish creepiness. I am running away as soon as I finish my comment. Boo! love, Kathy Richard Palmer October 20, 2012 at 4:59 PM hahaha,don't buck your toe,lol,thanks Kathryn

John Loving Iii October 17, 2012 at 5:20 PM thats the spirit. Richard Palmer October 18, 2012 at 11:34 AM thats the dead,lol,thanks John

Carol Eastman October 16, 2012 at 2:30 PM A great Halloween poem. Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 3:34 PM hope you guys read it on halloween,lol,thanks Carol

Sidra Firdous October 16, 2012 at 2:17 PM awsomeee love it..it paints the whole picture Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 3:34 PM thanks Sidra

Sukmawati Komala October 16, 2012 at 10:33 AM this is too scary to read in the midnight like am doing now..but happy with the Hah ha hah...creepy scary laugh...thanks Richard for your wonderful share :) <3<3<3 SK Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 12:11 PM get the ears muff on,search under the bed lol,thanks S.K

Rachel St.Cross October 16, 2012 at 6:54 AM ‡ Good Morning Dear Precious Richie. Just Passing Back By To Say Thank You Sweetie, For Your Lovely Heartfelt Visits. Have A Very Beautiful Day. My Love, Rachel ‡ Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 7:39 AM good morning my dearest,have a wonderful day

Poet Destroyer A October 15, 2012 at 8:14 PM Hello, Richard, wow..wow.. creepy scary and with an awesome image i can visual... xox..pd Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 7:38 AM thanks PD,hope you slept well,lol

Black Eyed Susan October 15, 2012 at 9:56 AM lol - hope you don't get caught - i bet some of those dead olympian sprinters would be pretty fast! Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 7:37 AM lol lol cracking up,try to get a head start,thanks BES

Paschal Aroke October 15, 2012 at 7:36 AM I am not mincing words if I call you the shakespear of our time. Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 7:33 AM blushing,honored at your comment,think I have a gift of putting words together,a lot of my friends think so too,but coming from another poet,thanks Paschal

Bukang Liwayway October 14, 2012 at 9:02 PM I like this poem of yours friend Richard... nicely done. thanks for sharing and advance hah ha hah halloween to you!!! (^_^) **Maria** Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 7:30 AM thanks much Maria,ha ha ha to you too,lol

Anthony Nutter October 14, 2012 at 4:42 PM Your write is close to my heart, love the darker reads. Excellent piece. Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 7:17 AM keep it close Anthony,thank you

Treisha Williams October 14, 2012 at 11:58 AM interesting. great Richard Palmer October 16, 2012 at 4:51 AM thanks Treisha

Erich Goller October 14, 2012 at 10:18 AM Halloween night indeed, that will scare everybody, a very scary expressed story poem, nice rhyme, I enjoyd reading it.God bless you. Erich. Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 7:29 PM thanks ERICH that was my intention,lol

Rachel St.Cross October 14, 2012 at 9:52 AM ‡ There Coming To Get You Margaret *;* Haha. Isn't Halloween A Blast, Dear Sweet Richard. Tis One Of The More Spooky Filled !nd Frieghtful Holiday Poems I Have Thus Far Viewed. Perhaps I Should Go Upon A Quest Here At PoetrySoup, In Search Of Poetics Offerings In Re Ghouls And Goblins ? Wonderful And Thank You For Your Lovely Visit. Love, Rachel ‡ Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 5:12 PM you are welcome Rachel,thanks much girl ox

Terry O'Leary October 14, 2012 at 3:02 AM Hmmm... sounds like party time... Terry (scary poem! & thanks for your kind comment) Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 12:53 PM yep get out you horror mask,lol,thanks Terry

Joy Wellington October 13, 2012 at 10:15 PM Rich, you made me feel like when I used to watch Dark Shadows, back in the day, yea, those days!! I used to cover my head when I go to bed.LOL. Good write bro. One love. Joy Wells Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 12:53 PM thanks Joy,happy to bring back childhood memories lol

Debbie Guzzi October 13, 2012 at 8:57 PM {shiver] scary is the might! Light & Love Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 4:32 AM shaking with you lol,thanks Debbie

Jack Ellison October 13, 2012 at 8:04 PM You scared the poop outta me just before beddy byes! Not nice, Richard! LOL Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 4:31 AM lol,better make sure the doors and windows are locked tight,lol,thanks Jack

Anne-Lise Andresen October 13, 2012 at 4:58 PM Creepy,scary,laugh,hah,ha,hah... Spooky night ...... extinguish the lights and lock all doors!! Witches and trolls are out in the streets. - Wishing you a beautiful weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :) Richard Palmer October 15, 2012 at 4:30 AM thanks Anne,same to you girl oxox nuff luv

Sara Kendrick October 13, 2012 at 4:15 PM So many scary Halloween works that everyone is creating..Yours is tops..Thanks for stopping by..Sara Richard Palmer October 14, 2012 at 8:58 PM honored by your comment,thanks Sara

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