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Hah Ha Hah Holloween Night

Fingers,the bones, Force through a casket, A body appears, Or should I say,what's left, Groans and moans, Earth bursting all around, Covering my ears, Shutting out this horrible sound, Countless dead, Raising from the ground, In your chest, Twice as fast your heart pound, Searching for the living, This Halloween night, Better not be caught, It won't be a wonderful sight.... Creepy,scary,laugh,hah,ha,hah...

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Date: 11/2/2012 8:16:00 PM
Spooky. I never did like zombies. They're too hard to kill. Good poem. Hope you survived the undead. :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 11/7/2012 6:04:00 AM
thanks Brittany,I did just getting out of the closet,lol
Date: 10/23/2012 4:10:00 PM
It seems, theres a bit of the macabre running through your veins. I guess halloween has that affect on us. Don't eat too much candy.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/23/2012 5:11:00 PM
I won't Robert,lol,thanks
Date: 10/23/2012 5:48:00 AM
Love it! Seems I can learn a lot about poetry from you:)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/23/2012 7:30:00 AM
lol,thanks much Sharon,ok,first homework read a few more and catch the flow,lol
Date: 10/20/2012 7:36:00 AM
I think of Michael Jackson 'Thriller' music clip when i read your poem Richard lol - Shaz :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/20/2012 5:12:00 PM
lol,thanks Shaz
Date: 10/19/2012 3:15:00 PM
scary one Richard, just love those zombie poems, and this is one of the best....
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/20/2012 5:00:00 PM
thanks Harry scared myself,lol
Date: 10/19/2012 9:24:00 AM
Richard - Goulish creepiness. I am running away as soon as I finish my comment. Boo! love, Kathy
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/20/2012 4:59:00 PM
hahaha,don't buck your toe,lol,thanks Kathryn
Date: 10/17/2012 5:20:00 PM
thats the spirit.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/18/2012 11:34:00 AM
thats the dead,lol,thanks John
Date: 10/16/2012 2:30:00 PM
A great Halloween poem.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 3:34:00 PM
hope you guys read it on halloween,lol,thanks Carol
Date: 10/16/2012 2:17:00 PM
awsomeee love it..it paints the whole picture
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 3:34:00 PM
thanks Sidra
Date: 10/16/2012 10:33:00 AM
this is too scary to read in the midnight like am doing now..but happy with the Hah ha hah...creepy scary laugh...thanks Richard for your wonderful share :) <3<3<3 SK
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 12:11:00 PM
get the ears muff on,search under the bed lol,thanks S.K
Date: 10/16/2012 6:54:00 AM
‡ Good Morning Dear Precious Richie. Just Passing Back By To Say Thank You Sweetie, For Your Lovely Heartfelt Visits. Have A Very Beautiful Day. My Love, Rachel ‡
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 7:39:00 AM
good morning my dearest,have a wonderful day
Date: 10/15/2012 8:14:00 PM
Hello, Richard, wow..wow.. creepy scary and with an awesome image i can visual... xox..pd
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 7:38:00 AM
thanks PD,hope you slept well,lol
Date: 10/15/2012 9:56:00 AM
lol - hope you don't get caught - i bet some of those dead olympian sprinters would be pretty fast!
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 7:37:00 AM
lol lol cracking up,try to get a head start,thanks BES
Date: 10/15/2012 7:36:00 AM
I am not mincing words if I call you the shakespear of our time.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 7:33:00 AM
blushing,honored at your comment,think I have a gift of putting words together,a lot of my friends think so too,but coming from another poet,thanks Paschal
Date: 10/14/2012 9:02:00 PM
I like this poem of yours friend Richard... nicely done. thanks for sharing and advance hah ha hah halloween to you!!! (^_^) **Maria**
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 7:30:00 AM
thanks much Maria,ha ha ha to you too,lol
Date: 10/14/2012 4:42:00 PM
Your write is close to my heart, love the darker reads. Excellent piece.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 7:17:00 AM
keep it close Anthony,thank you
Date: 10/14/2012 11:58:00 AM
interesting. great
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/16/2012 4:51:00 AM
thanks Treisha
Date: 10/14/2012 10:18:00 AM
Halloween night indeed, that will scare everybody, a very scary expressed story poem, nice rhyme, I enjoyd reading it.God bless you. Erich.
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 7:29:00 PM
thanks ERICH that was my intention,lol
Date: 10/14/2012 9:52:00 AM
‡ There Coming To Get You Margaret *;* Haha. Isn't Halloween A Blast, Dear Sweet Richard. Tis One Of The More Spooky Filled !nd Frieghtful Holiday Poems I Have Thus Far Viewed. Perhaps I Should Go Upon A Quest Here At PoetrySoup, In Search Of Poetics Offerings In Re Ghouls And Goblins ? Wonderful And Thank You For Your Lovely Visit. Love, Rachel ‡
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 5:12:00 PM
you are welcome Rachel,thanks much girl ox
Date: 10/14/2012 3:02:00 AM
Hmmm... sounds like party time... Terry (scary poem! & thanks for your kind comment)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 12:53:00 PM
yep get out you horror mask,lol,thanks Terry
Date: 10/13/2012 10:15:00 PM
Rich, you made me feel like when I used to watch Dark Shadows, back in the day, yea, those days!! I used to cover my head when I go to bed.LOL. Good write bro. One love. Joy Wells
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 12:53:00 PM
thanks Joy,happy to bring back childhood memories lol
Date: 10/13/2012 8:57:00 PM
{shiver] scary is the might! Light & Love
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 4:32:00 AM
shaking with you lol,thanks Debbie
Date: 10/13/2012 8:04:00 PM
You scared the poop outta me just before beddy byes! Not nice, Richard! LOL
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 4:31:00 AM
lol,better make sure the doors and windows are locked tight,lol,thanks Jack
Date: 10/13/2012 4:58:00 PM
Creepy,scary,laugh,hah,ha,hah... Spooky night ...... extinguish the lights and lock all doors!! Witches and trolls are out in the streets. - Wishing you a beautiful weekend! - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/15/2012 4:30:00 AM
thanks Anne,same to you girl oxox nuff luv
Date: 10/13/2012 4:15:00 PM
So many scary Halloween works that everyone is creating..Yours is tops..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Richard Palmer
Date: 10/14/2012 8:58:00 PM
honored by your comment,thanks Sara
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