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Had I Not Dared Break Free Or It Break Me

Had I Not Dared Break Free Or It Break Me Had I not dared break free or it break me would an unhappy soul have never sang or songbird's nest grace willing willow tree or prairie not fed herds of wild mustang. Had I known, life too oft, becomes a joke that Christmas snowmen far, far too soon melt if farmer's fresh virgin ground never broke and dawn's awakening in tired bones felt. Can one ever know, why nights are oft feared morn's clear calls are refused, even dreaded as if dawn's open arms have disappeared and its embrace is somehow wrongheaded. Had I never climbed that first tall oak tree Who or what on this earth would I now be? Robert J. Lindley , 8-19-2017 Sonnet,( Why our children must dare to first do)

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Date: 8/27/2017 7:09:00 AM
Very thought-provoking poem, Robert. All too often we let the fear of failure and / or the unknown stop us from taking a chance!! Valuable lessons to us all. All the best, John.
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Date: 8/23/2017 1:43:00 AM
Love your message of not letting fear hold us back. We need to instil these values in our children. Wonderful Robert! : )
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Date: 8/21/2017 3:10:00 PM
- Something to think about .... really great written, Robert - No one can give you the right answer - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/21/2017 11:34:00 AM
The last line is great..."Had I never climbed that first tall oak tree... Who or what on this earth would I now be? " Enjoyed it... Have a nice day
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Date: 8/21/2017 6:08:00 AM
Thought provoking sonnet, Robert, and so very true:)
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Date: 8/20/2017 9:30:00 PM
Wow Robert, what a great thought provoking poem about how things might have been...if... Excellent subject matter and imagery, beautifully written and totally enjoyed! :)
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Date: 8/20/2017 7:00:00 PM
Another great poem my friend! Your rhyme and imagery are always great and a pleasure to read.
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Date: 8/20/2017 10:12:00 AM
I love the state of wonderment this piece provoked.
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