Had I Not Dared Break Free Or It Break Me

Had I Not Dared Break Free Or It Break Me

Had I not dared break free or it break me
would an unhappy soul have never sang
or songbird's nest grace willing willow tree
or prairie not fed herds of wild mustang.

Had I known, life too oft, becomes a joke
that Christmas snowmen far, far too soon melt
if farmer's fresh virgin ground never broke
and dawn's awakening in tired bones felt.

Can one ever know, why nights are oft feared
morn's clear calls are refused, even dreaded
as if dawn's open arms have disappeared
and its embrace is somehow wrongheaded.

Had I never climbed that first tall oak tree
Who or what on this earth would I now be?

Robert J. Lindley , 8-19-2017
Sonnet,( Why our children must dare to first do)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Michaels Avatar
August 27, 2017 at 7:09 AM
Very thought-provoking poem, Robert. All too often we let the fear of failure and / or the unknown stop us from taking a chance!! Valuable lessons to us all. All the best, John.
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 23, 2017 at 1:43 AM
Love your message of not letting fear hold us back. We need to instil these values in our children. Wonderful Robert! : )
Andresen Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 3:10 PM
- Something to think about .... really great written, Robert - No one can give you the right answer - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 11:34 AM
The last line is great..."Had I never climbed that first tall oak tree... Who or what on this earth would I now be? " Enjoyed it... Have a nice day
Daniel Avatar
August 21, 2017 at 6:08 AM
Thought provoking sonnet, Robert, and so very true:)
Ashley Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Wow Robert, what a great thought provoking poem about how things might have been...if... Excellent subject matter and imagery, beautifully written and totally enjoyed! :)
Swartz Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 7:00 PM
Another great poem my friend! Your rhyme and imagery are always great and a pleasure to read.
Cresswell Avatar
August 20, 2017 at 10:12 AM
I love the state of wonderment this piece provoked.
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