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Pleiades H

HABOOB Harried sands joins forces, Hurrying towards us, Heavy with thud of hooves. Horrified! Seek shelter! Hampered sun does not shine. Hope sought in praying hands, Hapless in the storm’s core. 2/17/2017

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Joseph May

Date: 2/24/2017 9:49:00 PM

Congrats on a fine win Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2017 10:04:00 PM

Thank you, Joseph!

Sushma A. Singh

Date: 2/24/2017 7:54:00 PM

I found this really brilliant! Huge Congrats!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2017 7:58:00 PM

Thank you, Sushma!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 2/24/2017 3:03:00 PM

Wow, Kim, you packed some action into your 7 lines...well done! Congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2017 3:18:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/24/2017 2:39:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2017 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Eve Roper

Date: 2/23/2017 11:36:00 PM

Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/24/2017 5:20:00 AM

Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/23/2017 7:45:00 PM

great personification, Kim. Congrats for your win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2017 7:49:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Kim Merryman

Date: 2/23/2017 5:53:00 PM

Thinking outside the norm with this title! Great descriptive Pleiades on what I've heard is a terrifying experience. Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 2/23/2017 6:24:00 PM

Thanks so much, Kim! Enjoyed the contest!