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Haboob

HABOOB

Harried sands joins forces,
Hurrying towards us,
Heavy with thud of hooves.
Horrified! Seek shelter!
Hampered sun does not shine.
Hope sought in praying hands,
Hapless in the storm’s core.

2/17/2017

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Joseph May Date: 2/24/2017 9:49:00 PM Congrats on a fine win Kim Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/24/2017 10:04:00 PM Thank you, Joseph!

Sushma A. Singh Date: 2/24/2017 7:54:00 PM I found this really brilliant! Huge Congrats!! Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/24/2017 7:58:00 PM Thank you, Sushma!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 2/24/2017 3:03:00 PM Wow, Kim, you packed some action into your 7 lines...well done! Congrats to you! Hugs, Rhonda Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/24/2017 3:18:00 PM Thank you, Rhonda!

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/24/2017 2:39:00 AM - Congratulations on your great poem in Pleiades H contest, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/24/2017 5:20:00 AM Thank you, Anne-Lise!

Eve Roper Date: 2/23/2017 11:36:00 PM Back to congratulate you Hugs Eve Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/24/2017 5:20:00 AM Thank you, Eve!

Andrea Dietrich Date: 2/23/2017 7:45:00 PM great personification, Kim. Congrats for your win. Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/23/2017 7:49:00 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Kim Merryman Date: 2/23/2017 5:53:00 PM Thinking outside the norm with this title! Great descriptive Pleiades on what I've heard is a terrifying experience. Congrats on your win, Kim! Blessings, Kim Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/23/2017 6:24:00 PM Thanks so much, Kim! Enjoyed the contest!

Jan Allison Date: 2/18/2017 11:56:00 AM Thanks Kim!!!! I have learned a new word ... haboob and your poem is a great description of this event:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2017 12:58:00 PM Thank you, Jan! :)

Probir Gupta Date: 2/18/2017 8:22:00 AM Nicely symbolic and factual as well ... A thrill in the frontal cortex ... Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2017 8:28:00 AM Thanks! I am smiling :)

Eve Roper Date: 2/17/2017 11:59:00 PM Very good verse, well discribed it is very hard to do it all in a few words :) good luck in the contest Hugs eve Login to Reply Kim Rodrigues Date: 2/18/2017 7:07:00 AM Thank you, Eve! :)