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Habit Forming

Lead or follow, who can fathom? some of both I do suppose, the measure of our true devotion lies within our very souls. Sporadic arguments and spats, contorted faces, angry eyes, or reconciliations struck lest we distrust, and then despise. The path to joy is fraught with trials, trying, testing constantly, living, loving through the bad times, seeking equanimity. Happy days are habit forming, coloring our lives with fun, they'll overcome our fears and sorrows as we reach the setting sun, and at the end we're lovers blending, two hearts with a common goal, we'll defy the hurts and heartaches, nurturing will make us whole.

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Date: 1/5/2016 3:22:00 PM
Another great one, Keith. No pain, no gain.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 6:18:00 PM
Thank you my friend! Best wishes, Keith
Date: 1/4/2016 7:28:00 PM
this poem made me want to read it aloud, keith, and i was not disappointed. it sounds as wonderful as it reads on the page (okay, screen!). i especially love the second verse...
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/5/2016 4:52:00 AM
You are so kind! Thanks so much for your kind remarks. Hugs, Keith
Date: 1/4/2016 5:59:00 PM
This is a well written, imaginative, descriptive, and creative all rolled up into a beautiful poem.This poem flows well and carries a message aimed at the heart. Emile.
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/4/2016 6:10:00 PM
You bare very kind! Thanks Emile for your delightful review! Keith
Date: 1/4/2016 4:58:00 PM
Habit forming it is! Addictive, even!! A soothing poem, Keth!!
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Keith Bickerstaffe
Date: 1/4/2016 5:05:00 PM
Thanks Terry... so nice to hear from you again!! Best wishes, Keith

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