Ha Ha Ha!

sunny and warm 
clouds invade 
rain starts to fall 
it pours 
thunder cracks 
broken branches tap against the glass
the noise is so irritating 
it makes want to kick some......butt?
is this a suckish rhyme or what?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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A   Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 10:28 PM
nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
Conway Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 5:46 PM
I agree with Doris, or what- I liked it!~Tirzah~
Culverhouse Avatar
June 15, 2010 at 5:10 PM
or what!!
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