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her innocence gone
pink panties fell to the ground
virginity lost


7/20/18

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 7/21/2018 6:30:00 PM

What we need is to bring back the chastity belt!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2018 6:31:00 PM

Your comment made me smile Michelle!:-) hugs Jan xx

Lyric Man

Date: 7/21/2018 3:01:00 AM

That's how it happens.. we need tighter panties these days, Jan ;)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2018 6:43:00 AM

Yes for both the girls and the guys!!!:-) hugs Jan xx

Arthur Vaso

Date: 7/21/2018 1:47:00 AM

LOL ok I smiled!!!!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/21/2018 6:43:00 AM

Thanks Art:-) hugs jan xx

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/20/2018 4:22:00 PM

OMG Jan! My dear friend just told me last night her 16 yr. old grandson got his same age girlfriend pregnant and they both are not even out of high school. I really feel for her. Great poem to ponder!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 4:25:00 PM

gosh I'm sorry you can relate to it in some way , I wrote it on Thursday I when I got up at 3am as I couldn't sleep:-) hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/20/2018 12:58:00 PM

- Unnecessary stupidity ... they are very young today ... hope she is not pregnant - Enjoy your Friday :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 1:05:00 PM

These things happen for various reasons but it is such a shame when a young person has a child before they've had chance to grow up themselves:-( hugs Jan xx

Mike Gentile

Date: 7/20/2018 9:41:00 AM

quite an image there, Jan Happy Friday xxoo

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 10:48:00 AM

Have an awesome weekend Mike:-) hugs jan xx

Line Gauthier

Date: 7/20/2018 9:30:00 AM

Ouch.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 10:47:00 AM

Definitely Ouch Line:-( hugs jan xx

Joseph May

Date: 7/20/2018 8:32:00 AM

A schoolgirl's loss innocence..Gl in the contest Jan

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 8:34:00 AM

Not for any contest, just a poem that came to me in the wee small hours when i couldn't sleep :-( hugs jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart

Date: 7/20/2018 8:23:00 AM

Ouch.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 10:47:00 AM

when I was growing up our neighbours daughter got pregnant at just 13 had to have an emergency hysterectomy after the birth, was such a sad situation in so many ways, always stayed with me:-( hugs Jan xx

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/20/2018 8:50:00 AM

...and when I say "ouch", it means "excellent poetry" <3

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart
Date: 7/20/2018 8:42:00 AM

The muse keeps strange hours. My mum was "knocked up" at 15.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/20/2018 8:33:00 AM

I never know what my muse will come up with next Mo... I was still awake at 3am on Thursday (note to self don't have mushy peas with fish and chips as they always stop me sleeping lol) so got up to go to the bathroom and wrote this down on the back of a magazine - just found it now so thought it was worth posting:-) hugs jan xx

Gymslip Mum

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