Gymnastics

Goliath intention
Glitters within reach on
Grecian hallowed ground; the
Girl forged by sweat and chalk
Greets the beam with pristine
Gainer flip, ready to
Grace the world with her feat.






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Date: 04 / 12 / 2016
Form: Pleiades G
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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White Avatar
February 10, 2017 at 1:13 AM
Coming back with congratulations, Tamal :)
Kundu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:31 PM
Thanks as always, Darren.
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February 9, 2017 at 9:49 PM
Nice one! Congrats on your placement, Tamal.
Kundu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Thanks, Agnes
Merryman Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:56 PM
Tamal, you did a fantastic job of painting a visual of gymnastics with your words. Wonderful flowing lines, as well. Congrats on your 3rd place win! Blessings, Kim
Kundu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:32 PM
Thank you, Kim and thank you for the contest. I had a blast writing this one.
Leiser Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 8:24 PM
I love watching gymnastics! And you captured it well, Tamal! Congrats on your win :)
Kundu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Thanks you, Laura.
Rodrigues Avatar
February 9, 2017 at 7:47 PM
Very nice! Congrats!
Kundu Avatar
February 17, 2017 at 12:33 PM
Thank you, Kim!
Vinson Avatar
December 21, 2016 at 1:41 PM
You are a talent, Tamal. : )
Allison Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 7:15 PM
oh so clever Tamal good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
Kundu Avatar
December 17, 2016 at 8:27 PM
Thanks, Jan!
Dietrich Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 12:55 AM
This is wonderful, Tamal
Kundu Avatar
December 7, 2016 at 2:52 AM
Thank you, Andrea. And thank you for reading!
White Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 7:23 AM
Wow, I love that one, Tamal. It's very imaginative, good luck in the contest.
Kundu Avatar
December 4, 2016 at 8:15 AM
Thanks Darren!
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