Gusty Dawn Dances

Air
Billows
Crisp coiled curves
Dawn dances on
Earth

Fun
Gusts gain
Human halts
In impish ilke
Jests
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Callus Avatar
April 28, 2019 at 4:32 AM
A lovely, lively creative double Lanterne, CayCay! ~ Congratulations on your merited win. Regards // paul
Sands Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:36 PM
Great one. Congratulations :)
Dietrich Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:36 PM
yours is o dang poetic, Caycay. VERY nicely done. Congrats on the win, my sweet friend. soupmail
Andresen Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 1:09 PM
- Congratulations, CayCay ... very well done :) - Lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
May Avatar
April 27, 2019 at 12:42 PM
I love the dance of dawn...Congrats on your win CayCay...
Faulkner Avatar
April 12, 2019 at 1:12 PM
A lively and joyous lanterne - best of luck in the contest!
Proxenos Avatar
April 7, 2019 at 11:39 AM
Hi CayCay - love this poem - good luck in the contest. By the way love your vampire reply LOL- we will ALWAYS be friends. Poetry hus, Jenny.
Marcum Wong Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 12:29 PM
A perfect acrostic elegant in your choice of conciseness! I love it! Easter blessings my dear friend. xxoo
Smith Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 10:05 AM
Wonderful entry CayCay, best wishes...
Cunningham Avatar
April 5, 2019 at 6:57 AM
You've done this really well CayCay, they are not easy to do. Good luck in the contest. Tom
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