Gush of Mid-January

As mockingbirds flee in the cadence of pellucid rain , drizzles hide a vermillion moon that is twilight’s burst: still, a gush so dulcet spawns a melody while stray buds, pebbles, and lit ripples tap my feet on a menagerie of glass. And droplets infuse a mid-January tempo granting sweet content, where luscious drift from trickles slip-slides on hours bathed in a fresh cycle , her ancestral rite of cleansing past errors... then to tug, devour, to grasp a new purpose. Briam's Choice Y
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Ashley Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:00 PM
Congratulations Nette on your wonderful win! Well done.. ~Susan
Smith Avatar
January 12, 2018 at 8:55 AM
Terrific work Nette, congratulations...
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January 11, 2018 at 7:45 PM
Lovely Nette! Congrats on your win!! ~Judy
O.J. Hunt Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 7:19 PM
Good mix with all those words, enjoyed this poem and its unique impression nette;-)
Gauthier Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 6:20 PM
Congrats on your win, nette. Well done.
Sands Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 5:38 PM
Well done! Congratulations Nette :)
Y. Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 4:39 PM
Hi Nette, Congratulations on your fine win:-) Alexis
May Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 3:17 PM
Congrats on your win Nette
One Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 2:49 PM
Some great lines in your poem nette, you used the words very well... Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
Lamoureux Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 12:33 PM
Gorgeous Nette. Hugs Rick.
Gupta Avatar
January 11, 2018 at 10:21 AM
Beautiful interplay between poetic power and the ten words of challenge ... Enjoyed reading, Nette ... Best wishes ...
Aldea Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 9:15 PM
Hi Nette, I missed a lot of your poems.... Have a blessed new year. Cheryl
May Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:45 PM
Beautifully penned Nette...best wishes
Andresen Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 2:50 PM
- 10 difficult words, Nette - But, you're doing it so wonderful - Will rank high on the winning list, good luck :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Inman Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 10:15 AM
Beautiful imagery Nette. I rooted 25 or 30 Frangipani from cuttings (Plumeria-Melemele specifically) last year and gave them to people I work with, white with yellow throats and very fragrant. I'm not sure which day it is but happy birthday.
Pandit Avatar
January 10, 2018 at 6:22 AM
I enjoyed reading your scenic poem, nette..your words flow and rise to high purpose..best for a win.
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