Gunslinger

Gunslinger

I swung the doors open, hard and loud
My view was hindered by the cloud.
Of smoke and ash in hand and tray
As I darkly stood in that old doorway.

Dried blood 'n stale beer spotted the floor. 
They told of bad stories while predicting more.  
It was their place, I came from afar.
I was the stranger in the ol' folks bar.
 
I wasn't like 'dem, ol' regular folk.
I came with a holster not proverbial joke.   
My face was grimy, my spurs showed rust,
I groaned, I shouted, and 'den I cussed.

She saw my move, it preceding her scream 
Now before her eyes one horrific dream.
My hand with pistol rose into place
She lifted her arms and covered her face.

I downed my whiskey, 'da final drop
Everything slowed, then came to a stop.
I fired first once and again now twice
Then I left that ol' bar and 'dem two dead mice.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 2/4/2021 7:47:00 PM
Great humor! Congratulations, Jerry!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thanks, take care
Date: 2/4/2021 11:14:00 AM
Great write, Jerry. I do like a ‘punchline’ and this delivers. Well deserved win. Terry.
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Date: 2/5/2021 2:00:00 AM
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Date: 2/4/2021 8:57:00 AM
Congrats, this left me chuckling.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:01:00 AM
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Date: 2/4/2021 7:29:00 AM
Hi Jerry, You've penned a good “ cowboy” poem. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:10:00 AM
Ha! I laughed at this one Jerry! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:01:00 AM
Giddy up
Date: 4/20/2018 4:30:00 AM
- A poem that deserves its first place ... Congratulations, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thanks, and now I gotta giddy-up
Date: 4/19/2018 9:03:00 PM
Oh I love cowboys! Congratulations on your win with this well-written and humorous cowboy tale. Excellent!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
Date: 4/19/2018 4:08:00 PM
A fabulously endearing cowboy poem. So entertaining. Love it, Jerry. Thanks for entering my contest with this gold medal winner.
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Date: 4/20/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
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