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Gunslinger

Gunslinger I swung the doors open, hard and loud My view was hindered by the cloud. Of smoke and ash in hand and tray As I darkly stood in that old doorway. Dried blood 'n stale beer spotted the floor. They told of bad stories while predicting more. It was their place, I came from afar. I was the stranger in the ol' folks bar. I wasn't like 'dem, ol' regular folk. I came with a holster not proverbial joke. My face was grimy, my spurs showed rust, I groaned, I shouted, and 'den I cussed. She saw my move, it preceding her scream Now before her eyes one horrific dream. My hand with pistol rose into place She lifted her arms and covered her face. I downed my whiskey, 'da final drop Everything slowed, then came to a stop. I fired first once and again now twice Then I left that ol' bar and 'dem two dead mice.

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Date: 2/4/2021 7:47:00 PM
Great humor! Congratulations, Jerry!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thanks, take care
Date: 2/4/2021 11:14:00 AM
Great write, Jerry. I do like a ‘punchline’ and this delivers. Well deserved win. Terry.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:00:00 AM
Thanks, take care
Date: 2/4/2021 8:57:00 AM
Congrats, this left me chuckling.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:01:00 AM
Thanks, take care
Date: 2/4/2021 7:29:00 AM
Hi Jerry, You've penned a good “ cowboy” poem. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/4/2021 6:10:00 AM
Ha! I laughed at this one Jerry! Congratulations on the win! Linda
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 2/5/2021 2:01:00 AM
Giddy up
Date: 4/20/2018 4:30:00 AM
- A poem that deserves its first place ... Congratulations, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:42:00 PM
Thanks, and now I gotta giddy-up
Date: 4/19/2018 9:03:00 PM
Oh I love cowboys! Congratulations on your win with this well-written and humorous cowboy tale. Excellent!
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
Date: 4/19/2018 4:08:00 PM
A fabulously endearing cowboy poem. So entertaining. Love it, Jerry. Thanks for entering my contest with this gold medal winner.
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
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Jerry Hackett
Date: 4/20/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up

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