Gunslinger

Gunslinger

I swung the doors open, hard and loud
My view was hindered by the cloud.
Of smoke and ash in hand and tray
As I darkly stood in that old doorway.

Dried blood 'n stale beer spotted the floor. 
They told of bad stories while predicting more.  
It was their place, I came from afar.
I was the stranger in the ol' folks bar.
 
I wasn't like 'dem, ol' regular folk.
I came with a holster not proverbial joke.   
My face was grimy, my spurs showed rust,
I groaned, I shouted, and 'den I cussed.

She saw my move, it preceding her scream 
Now before her eyes one horrific dream.
My hand with pistol rose into place
She lifted her arms and covered her face.

I downed my whiskey, 'da final drop
Everything slowed, then came to a stop.
I fired first once and again now twice
Then I left that ol' bar and 'dem two dead mice.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Rodrigues Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:47 PM
Great humor! Congratulations, Jerry!
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 2:00 AM
Thanks, take care
Flood Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 11:14 AM
Great write, Jerry. I do like a ‘punchline’ and this delivers. Well deserved win. Terry.
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 2:00 AM
Thanks, take care
Babbit Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 8:57 AM
Congrats, this left me chuckling.
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 2:01 AM
Thanks, take care
Y. Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 7:29 AM
Hi Jerry, You've penned a good “ cowboy” poem. Congratulations on your win. Have a great day:-) Alexis
Fowler Avatar
February 4, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Ha! I laughed at this one Jerry! Congratulations on the win! Linda
Hackett Avatar
February 5, 2021 at 2:01 AM
Giddy up
Andresen Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 4:30 AM
- A poem that deserves its first place ... Congratulations, Jerry :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Hackett Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 12:42 PM
Thanks, and now I gotta giddy-up
Gentry Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 9:03 PM
Oh I love cowboys! Congratulations on your win with this well-written and humorous cowboy tale. Excellent!
Hackett Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
Gauthier Avatar
April 19, 2018 at 4:08 PM
A fabulously endearing cowboy poem. So entertaining. Love it, Jerry. Thanks for entering my contest with this gold medal winner.
Hackett Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
Hackett Avatar
April 20, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thanks and now I gotta giddy-up
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