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Gunshot of Autonomy

Caged up in the brain’s shackles of lust and lies Rags of despair disillusion and utter reformed thoughts hang Puddles of thick perverse actions gather and stain crimson For he is a mirage of false hope cascading over your senses Then final reiteration of the branded instant’s ultimate sound.

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Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/27/2011 4:10:00 PM

Out of the heart is where the evil seeds of sin are....this is an excellent poem about lust and the destructive tho'ts it creates. A lovely write and much appreciated this day. Congrats on being featured this week...I can't believe I almost missed this. Gwendolen

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/28/2011 11:25:00 AM

Thank you. Much appreciated. <3

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/24/2011 4:37:00 AM

Congratulations on your poem being featured this week, Gabrielle

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/23/2011 5:12:00 AM

Congratulations on your well deserved poetry being featured this week Gabrielle. Love, Carol

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/23/2011 5:31:00 PM

Thank you <3

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/22/2011 8:11:00 PM

Congrats Gabrielle on your featured poem this week on P.S. a great piece to share with us all with luv..

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/23/2011 5:30:00 PM

Thanks a ton!(:

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/21/2011 6:06:00 AM

Good one..Congrats.Sara

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/20/2011 9:54:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Brian's contest Gabrielle. Love, Carol

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 5/18/2011 6:46:00 PM

heavy duty poem for a heavy duty win Gabrielle! Congratulations to you on your winning entry.

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/18/2011 8:22:00 PM

Gracias!(:

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/18/2011 12:40:00 AM

Congratulations on your win, Gabrielle.

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/18/2011 8:22:00 PM

Thanks(:

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 5/17/2011 1:23:00 PM

Congratulations on the win in the contest of brian, Gabrielle

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/17/2011 3:33:00 PM

Thank you very much!(:

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/16/2011 5:22:00 AM

A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Gabrielle. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/16/2011 3:57:00 PM

Thank you very much! This site has become so much fun!

Mourning Mist

Date: 5/15/2011 2:01:00 PM

good poem...all one can do is change the rags to riches right?

Gabrielle Wolcott
Date: 5/15/2011 2:19:00 PM

Very true. <3

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/15/2011 1:16:00 PM

Interesting work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara