Gun-O-Ku

trigger fingers flex
innocent victims crumple
questions unanswered


For the "Gun"-o-ku poetry contest sponsored by Gwendolen R.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Williams Avatar
February 27, 2013 at 12:56 PM
Congratulations on your win...David
Dietrich Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 4:35 PM
I really liked this the first time I read it as well. Congrats for your win.
Poet Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:33 AM
Congrats on your win!!
Tams The Golden Girl Avatar
February 26, 2013 at 10:27 AM
Many congratulations on your number 1 Frank xx
Johnson Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 11:40 PM
Congratulations on your win. Love, joyce
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February 25, 2013 at 9:03 PM
Frank, Congratulations with your winning poem in Rix's "A "Gun"-o-ku " contest. Goodnight~ LINDA
Song Avatar
February 25, 2013 at 8:15 PM
Frank. U had me caught up in the moment of this intense haiku. Wonderful entry for my gun o ku contest. Please refer to my lil blog. gwendolen
Williams Avatar
January 22, 2013 at 1:42 AM
Frank oh how true, very well done...David
Dietrich Avatar
January 21, 2013 at 4:50 PM
I think you did a great entry for the contest with this one, frank!
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