Gummy Bear in the Sawatch Range

There were infinite shades of green.
A few angelic-scented cascades. 
A pair of brown birds sang to me.
I tossed a bit of chocolate on the pine needle carpet.
They pecked the pieces and quickly flew off. 
Somewhat ungrateful-I thought.

Breaching the tree line, the apron was next.
Thick-necked marmots played alpine flutes. 
With rough-and-tumble attitudes. 
The pikas were shy and very difficult to find.
(furry headed stones against the talus gray sky).

After hiking a dozen switchbacks.
I came upon a crushed emerald pond.
Granite-lined and orchid-shaped.
Living off winter's froth. 
I decided the pond
wouldn't be nameless after all.
I'll name it Noah.

I finally reached the pinnacle. 
I was greeted by a shiny gummy bear.
At elevation, it looked like a yellow gem.
Another hiker boasted that he was the second-highest thing 
in the lower forty-eight. (He was taller than me).
I was too fatigued to say anything.
The panorama was humbling/the air was pinkish and pure. 
I was nearer to God than I'd ever been before. 

I re-entered the forest, sipping a cherry soda. 
That night I slept as if I were orphaned from death.
Dreaming of chocolate birds and giant yellow bears.

When I awoke, I was no longer the tallest of anything.
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Dietrich Avatar
September 22, 2024 at 11:47 AM
Surreal and witty. Cool write, Anthony!
Bartley Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 4:03 PM
That was a fun read. Thanks for sharing!
Bianco Avatar
August 28, 2024 at 5:47 PM
Thank you, B.B, for having a look, glad you enjoyed it God bless Anthony
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