Guitar on His Back

No money he had, just guitar on his back
he took to the roads as the evening turned black
he said no goodbyes to all that he knew
and never looked back to his love that was true

his path followed rivers and fern covered hills
and his eyes looked ahead over fields and mills
he'll take his guitar and let songs pay his way
and he'll look for his fortune what ever they say

so he went through the valley and a town he did stay
and sang for his supper for many a day
but he could not forget of his love left behind
and how true that she was and so loving and kind

so back to the path climbed the fern covered hills
to see if his love would be waiting there still
and when he returned it was not as expected
she'd found a new love, and now felt rejected

so with no money he had,  took guitar on his back
and took to the roads but his confidence lacked
no one goodbyes and nothing left that he owned
but kept looking back to his love ,  to the love,  she once shown.
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Date: 7/21/2025 6:16:00 PM
Love this, have a similar song. Would love to write with you sometime. Read several of your poems.. we could do something together!
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/21/2025 10:32:00 PM
That sounds good. l dont know how colabs work as not done them before. l write all the time, got loads of ideas. let me know what you think. J.
Date: 7/11/2025 5:56:00 PM
Ah...this poem is absolutely heartbreaking..so well written. Sometimes people find true love but they don't end up together, life gets in the way. Something so devastating about it, isn't it.
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Anne Winter
Date: 7/13/2025 9:52:00 PM
Dear Jacqueline, sending you warm hugs and wishing you a speedy recovery. Hope you're back to your amazing self soon. Take care of yourself <3
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Jacqueline Elston
Date: 7/13/2025 1:19:00 AM
thank you so much Anne for taking a look at my poem .Im not well at moment in lots of pain so cant read up on much, but will be sure to catch up reading your poetry too that you so kindly share with us all. Have a great weekend. J.
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