Guilty Raindrops

GUILTY    RAINDROPS


Telling  me again where I went wrong,
Just listen  to the laughter of the falling rain -
When everyone knows  now,  in vain,
That it was the rain’s  fault all along.

Rainfall, you're no friend of mine.
Where were you when she was storming out?
When I was pleading  and trying not to shout?
For you and me now, it’s the end of the line.

You made silly puddles and watched as my girl left town
You just watched, and  with all your power 
You didn’t  pelt,  pour,  or shower,
You  didn’t even drizzle down.

Surely there was something you could have done?
If you’d poured from the sky
She wouldn't have left me,  but you just didn't try: 
But you didn't do nothing, you let her walk on.

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Written 8 April  2012
Entered in    Black Eyed Susan’s Contest    Blame It on the Rain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Guzzi Avatar
April 24, 2012 at 6:41 PM
Congrad's on your big win. Light & Love
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 5:44 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Susan's "Blame It on the Rain" contest Sidney. Love, Carol
Guzzi Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 6:16 PM
I think this was a good expression of your inner child! LOL Congrad's Light & Love
Williams Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 10:15 AM
Sidney congrats on your win...David
Johnson Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 9:46 AM
You play a great blame game. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Susan Avatar
April 18, 2012 at 8:49 AM
Congratulations on your #5 win in my contest!
Edwards Avatar
April 8, 2012 at 7:48 AM
Cool write Sid..some times in life people are just meant to walk on.. Hugs xx
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