Get Your Premium Membership

Guilty Onlooker

One day i watched a housefly perish. A memory i'd never hold or cherish. A soul escaped his writhing mass magnified by looking glass. I swore i'd seen its final breath and knew i'd been its cause of death. Insignificant i know God slap my wrist! Oh lord i wish the fly swat missed.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 4/10/2010 2:10:00 PM
This is very good ! One of the best poems here for a while! A lot of depth ! Thanks
Login to Reply
Date: 3/29/2010 12:31:00 PM
Another very good one. Enjoyed.
Login to Reply
Date: 3/28/2010 7:46:00 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight... enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things