Guilty Onlooker

One day i watched a housefly perish. 
A memory i'd never hold or cherish.
A soul escaped his writhing mass
magnified by looking glass.
I swore i'd seen its final breath
and knew i'd been its cause of death.

Insignificant i know God slap my wrist!
Oh lord i wish the fly swat missed.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 10, 2010 at 2:10 PM
This is very good ! One of the best poems here for a while! A lot of depth ! Thanks
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March 29, 2010 at 12:31 PM
Another very good one. Enjoyed.
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March 28, 2010 at 7:46 AM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets... please continue to share your creative writes with us all.. as this delight tonight... enjoyed..luv.. Linda-Marie.. "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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