Guillotine

heavy painting fell
no heads on the chopping block
plenty of goosebumps

11/29/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Wolf Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:12 PM
You're right!! Reading this gave me the goosebumps!! :) gw
Wolf Avatar
December 5, 2018 at 7:14 PM
'You're right!!' made no sense, I see. Your reply to my comment was spot on... But the rest of the comment stands (along with the hair on my body from the goosebumps)! :) gw
Rodrigues Avatar
December 2, 2018 at 9:30 PM
Right?!
La France Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 6:25 PM
Kim, this really made me smile, I had a print fall on my head once when I was in bed, good thing it was light ~
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 8:02 PM
Yikes? A few months back a heavy painting fell off the wall. So unexpected!
Dietrich Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:31 PM
Good picturing it NOT happening. Imagine having to die that way!!
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:35 PM
Don’t want to imagine... Thanks, sweet lady!
Blanca Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 2:15 PM
Very nice Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Carlos!
Ashley Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 2:14 PM
Great imagery, Kim! Glad no one was hurt. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 5:34 PM
Thank you, Susan! <3 Kim
Green Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 12:00 PM
Life's scary moments. Nicely done Kim.
Rodrigues Avatar
November 29, 2018 at 12:01 PM
For sure! I’d rather be scared then someone hurt!
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