Guillotine

heavy painting fell no heads on the chopping block plenty of goosebumps 11/29/2018

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Gershon Wolf

Date: 12/2/2018 9:12:00 PM

You're right!! Reading this gave me the goosebumps!! :) gw

Gershon Wolf
Date: 12/5/2018 7:14:00 PM

'You're right!!' made no sense, I see. Your reply to my comment was spot on... But the rest of the comment stands (along with the hair on my body from the goosebumps)! :) gw

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 12/2/2018 9:30:00 PM

Right?!

Constance La France

Date: 11/29/2018 6:25:00 PM

Kim, this really made me smile, I had a print fall on my head once when I was in bed, good thing it was light ~

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2018 8:02:00 PM

Yikes? A few months back a heavy painting fell off the wall. So unexpected!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/29/2018 5:31:00 PM

Good picturing it NOT happening. Imagine having to die that way!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2018 5:35:00 PM

Don’t want to imagine... Thanks, sweet lady!

Lunita Blanca

Date: 11/29/2018 2:15:00 PM

Very nice Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2018 5:34:00 PM

Thank you, Carlos!

Susan Ashley

Date: 11/29/2018 2:14:00 PM

Great imagery, Kim! Glad no one was hurt. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2018 5:34:00 PM

Thank you, Susan! <3 Kim

Chris Green

Date: 11/29/2018 12:00:00 PM

Life's scary moments. Nicely done Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 11/29/2018 12:01:00 PM

For sure! I’d rather be scared then someone hurt!