Brian Davey Poet Rhyme

Guiding Light

Guiding Light



                               Luminescent it glows, pale ring of light

                                        Mystery rock planet, no atmosphere

                                                  During the day it disappears from sight

                                                            Crater dusted orb brings life to us here

                                                                     When the sun goes down she rises up bright

                                                                                Me and the moon holding hands in the night...



                                                                                                                     01/23/17

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James Inman February 3, 2017 at 7:51 AM Love the moon Brian, nice write. Brian Davey May 18, 2017 at 10:31 PM As do I my friend

Andrea Dietrich February 2, 2017 at 7:00 PM Brian. really nice personification. Check out your poem looking at it from my view. You need to fix the format. Congrats on your well deserved win. Brian Davey May 18, 2017 at 10:30 PM Thank you so much Andrea

Paulette Calasibetta February 1, 2017 at 4:16 PM Hi Brian, congratulations on your win....great piece, loved the imagery as well as your placement of lines. Brian Davey February 1, 2017 at 6:15 PM Thank you very much