Guiding Light

Through those times of madness
When I've no more energy to fight
When I've that feeling of emptiness      
You bring me up to the highest height                        

When ever I'm drowning in loneliness
And every day is just black and white                                                                                                   
When ever I'm in times of sadness
The day dreary, your my guiding light                     

But you did always believe in happiness              
Every one feeing happy, feeling all right
Was that perhaps your thoughtfulness          
A visionary who always had great insight

Then you did have such an awareness                         i
The memory of you here day and night
Like when ever I'm in times of darkness
And I can't see, you are my guiding light










I don't know wThis was also inspierd by an old song we we sang at school
here I was going with this write the words guiding light
Took from a poem I wrote called someone back in 2004
Trying to keep pattern as did with others such as WONDERER ,KALIDOSCOPE,SORROW,ECT
this poem guiding light is a tribute to a friend I lost tragicly back in september 1993
someone like no other she was GUIDING LIGHT iM REFERING TO HER SPIRIT THAT LVES ON 
AND GETS ME THROUGH THE DAY ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,written by myself DAVID SCOTT JUNE JULY 2012

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 5/26/2014 12:08:00 PM
Great heart gives makes this poem a most satisfying read.... Only diminished slightly by a couple of grammatical errors..(verse 2, line 4... time's should be times... Likewise verse 4, line 3... Time's to times.) Great flow and beautiful sentiment..... Jake
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