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Guiding Light

This star will guide you. Framed in rock periphery, head north to my heart. *For contest "FAMILIARITY UNKNOWN"

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Cynthia Ferguson

Date: 9/20/2014 5:20:00 AM

very nice haiku , a poem style I was happy to learn of here

Daver Austin

Date: 9/15/2014 3:36:00 PM

I like the idea. Makes me think. Congrats on the selection. daver

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/18/2010 8:26:00 AM

Congrats John on your winning poem in Gareth's contest... a wonderful write and win for u to now enjoy my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/18/2010 5:34:00 AM

Terrific entry, John. Like the line about "rock periphery" and the instructions on how to "head north" to your heart. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn