Guiding Light

This star will guide you.
Framed in rock periphery,
head north to my heart.


*For contest "FAMILIARITY UNKNOWN"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Ferguson Avatar
September 20, 2014 at 5:20 AM
very nice haiku , a poem style I was happy to learn of here
Austin Avatar
September 15, 2014 at 3:36 PM
I like the idea. Makes me think. Congrats on the selection. daver
Sweetheart Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 8:26 AM
Congrats John on your winning poem in Gareth's contest... a wonderful write and win for u to now enjoy my friend..luv.. "Sweetheart"
Devonshire Avatar
April 18, 2010 at 5:34 AM
Terrific entry, John. Like the line about "rock periphery" and the instructions on how to "head north" to your heart. Well done. Congratulations on your win! Love, Carolyn
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