Guidind Stars

Guiding Stars (Rondelet) Time shining through With a peaceful bliss for the mind Time shining through Glorified sky forever blue Heaven and earth shall always bind Where life’s precious moment we find Time shining through Erich J. Goller Copyright 8.31.2012
Rondelet The Rondelet is a French form consisting of a single septet with two rhymes and one refrain: AbAabbA. The capital letters are the refrains, or repeats. The refrain is written in tetra-syllabic or dimeter and the other lines are twice as long - octasyllabic or tetrameter. Refrain is the lines with the capitals. So the refrain is lines 1, 3, and 7. This is written in tetra-syllabic which is 4 syllables per line. The other lines are written in octasyllabic (8 syllables) or tetrameter (10 syllables).
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Dietrich Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 5:50 PM
hey, how did I ever miss THIS one? it is a shiny star!!
Goller Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 8:19 PM
thank you very much Andrea,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem.Hugs!Erich
Ramage Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 12:53 PM
lovely poem, very nice. Lee
Goller Avatar
October 3, 2012 at 2:23 PM
thank you very much Lee.Erich
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 1:26 PM
An extremely good poem Erich. - Bravo. - Have a wonderful afternoon. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
Goller Avatar
October 2, 2012 at 2:13 PM
thank you very much Anne Lise,I'm glad you enjoyed the poem,Hugs!Erich
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