Guided By Light

Meadow of boulders,
Led by the Shepherd of light:
A flock of stone sheep.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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April 21, 2010 at 5:49 PM
This is a super depiction of the new "Guiding Light" contest. I especially adore the "flock of stone sheep". The size of those stones does closely match the size of sheep.
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April 21, 2010 at 12:20 PM
Clever Haiku Raul, this lovely planet has so many of these meadows you write about >> James
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April 18, 2010 at 5:42 PM
What an inspirational poem! So much meaning in your words. Thank you for sharing your talent with us. You have Soup Mail! Karen
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April 18, 2010 at 3:39 PM
thanks and thanks for posting pictures i enjoy writing about them and the other poets as well
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April 17, 2010 at 11:05 PM
Raul - Soup Mail in a moment.
Mehta Avatar
April 17, 2010 at 10:23 PM
A fine haiku images with explicit meanings
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April 17, 2010 at 1:47 PM
And a beautiful Haiku to reflect your photo in the Tranquility contest... that was a magnificent photo Raul and a pleasant surprise that my "Equanimity" place 7th.. so appreciate u choosing that Haiku as your contests are both enjoyable and challenging as the new one I've just entered.. a true artiste and poet... thankxxx luv.. "Sweetheart"
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April 17, 2010 at 1:03 PM
What a beautiful, and inspirational haiku this is! The last line is amazing!!! And thank you once more for challenging the rest of us in your recent Haiku contest...I'm so glad to be among those other fine poems. The photo in your next "Still Life" contest...oh my goodness...a whole new challenge...and unexpected .......you will have some interesting ideas floating around I'm sure!! :) Thanks again! Love, Carrie
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