Guidance

dark is evening cloud
when my journey finds dead ends
till stars guide up high
sending good omen
of saintly peace



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Roper Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 12:18 PM
Congratulations on your win a 7 on this beautiful verse. Hugs Eve
Lamoureux Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 8:37 AM
Wow, I think you did a great job with this one. Congrats on your win.
Onclaud Avatar
July 4, 2015 at 6:05 AM
clapping for you carly.. sweet congrats!.. huggs
A. Sharma Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 10:22 PM
Congrats on ur awesome winning senryu Carly!
Merryman Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 8:46 PM
Carly, congrats on a great win! Well done! Love, Kim
A  Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 6:47 PM
HI CARLY, Congratulations on the win. SKAT
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July 3, 2015 at 6:25 PM
Carly, Congratulations on Your Own Existence Senryu win. Love LINDA
Dietrich Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:49 PM
Nice one this is. Congrats for your win.
Celestial Avatar
July 3, 2015 at 4:51 AM
Great Carly! You made it!
Gifford Avatar
June 20, 2015 at 10:27 PM
Hi, I liked your Senryu. Good luck in the contest. ~~Darlene
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