Guess Who-

Guess Who… By Dane Smith-Johnsen Rolling waves of tears Drowning with problems and fears. Guess who saves the day.

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Moonbee Canady

Date: 11/12/2009 10:51:00 PM

Very Nice ... Who Saves The Day ... The Same One Who Allows Breathing Right ? (smile) ... MoonBee

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 10/25/2009 3:12:00 PM

Mighty Mouse!!!! LOL ....Popeye? Super Woman? Dane soup mail me the list of who has already written lines Okies? Light & Love

Nicole Sharon Brown

Date: 10/25/2009 2:28:00 PM

God! Praise God! I love this! Amen, sister!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/25/2009 12:39:00 PM

I know who can save the day. But I hope that everyone else does. Thank you for your comments on my work. I know that you get some depth out of them. Keep writing. Sara

Date: 10/25/2009 12:14:00 PM

God! Hope all works out for you. Keep the faith. Karen

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 10/25/2009 8:20:00 AM

Knowing your faith, Dane, there is no need for me to "guess." Yes, it is God who "saves the day" when we seem to be overwhelmed by problems. I'm sorry I haven't had much time to communicate with Barbara visiting. Then there's my other friend visiting in November followed by the holidays. I do hope you work out your issues with the publisher. You are on my mind! Love you, dear! Carolyn