Laura Breidenthal Poet Free verse

Guardian of the Galaxy

Through this dangerous unknown, my body floats on
I am never alone in this chaos I have learned to ingest
You crush your art into my meteorite mortar
Meshing all the fragrances together in a sterile strength only you possess
You pour your crushed demeanor upon a misunderstood mind
Anonymous grievances that only translate into magnificence

You are the guardian of the galaxy
Guiding every wrong move into a reason to exist
Guiding even the lost into true meaning

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Timothy Hicks May 12, 2016 at 1:54 PM You have an eye for the celestial that drips with optimism: "Anonymous grievances that only translate into magnificence" "Guiding every wrong move into a reason to exist" ... epic lines here, Laura. And passionate as always ... Laura Breidenthal May 12, 2016 at 7:45 PM Thanks, my friend (: your comments mean so much to me..i always appreciate your thoughtful words... will be visiting your page soon. <3~Laura

Jslambert Mister Roboto July 24, 2014 at 12:08 AM hello. This title rocks cosmic ass! and the poem was read to me and it sounds spatially GGGGREAT! Im an L.D. reader. Kinda sorta negative, bc most people on here won't read Justin's tribute, unless I have a translator.

Dan Kearley July 22, 2014 at 2:05 AM Well, well... I have so much to catch up on! Nice to see your still here. :o)

Justin Bordner July 16, 2014 at 12:34 AM Consuming chaos changes us into vessels of courage Laura. "Guiding even the lost into true meaning..." our beauty survives in our resilience my lovely Laura. I like how abrassive and physical this strength is in your Art. Very intelligent and affectionate poetry! J.A.B.

Poet Tacito July 15, 2014 at 11:17 AM And I can't wait to see the movie in a few weeks! That said, this was AWESOME! This line is so valid: "I am never alone in this chaos I have learned to ingest"...impeccably strong. It's so great to read you again! You've been missed!!!! Hiiiii! :)