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Guardian of the Galaxy

Through this dangerous unknown, my body floats on I am never alone in this chaos I have learned to ingest You crush your art into my meteorite mortar Meshing all the fragrances together in a sterile strength only you possess You pour your crushed demeanor upon a misunderstood mind Anonymous grievances that only translate into magnificence You are the guardian of the galaxy Guiding every wrong move into a reason to exist Guiding even the lost into true meaning

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 5/12/2016 1:54:00 PM
You have an eye for the celestial that drips with optimism: "Anonymous grievances that only translate into magnificence" "Guiding every wrong move into a reason to exist" ... epic lines here, Laura. And passionate as always ...
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Laura Breidenthal
Date: 5/12/2016 7:45:00 PM
Thanks, my friend (: your comments mean so much to me..i always appreciate your thoughtful words... will be visiting your page soon. <3~Laura
Date: 7/24/2014 12:08:00 AM
hello. This title rocks cosmic ass! and the poem was read to me and it sounds spatially GGGGREAT! Im an L.D. reader. Kinda sorta negative, bc most people on here won't read Justin's tribute, unless I have a translator.
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Date: 7/22/2014 2:05:00 AM
Well, well... I have so much to catch up on! Nice to see your still here. :o)
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Date: 7/16/2014 12:34:00 AM
Consuming chaos changes us into vessels of courage Laura. "Guiding even the lost into true meaning..." our beauty survives in our resilience my lovely Laura. I like how abrassive and physical this strength is in your Art. Very intelligent and affectionate poetry! J.A.B.
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Date: 7/15/2014 11:17:00 AM
And I can't wait to see the movie in a few weeks! That said, this was AWESOME! This line is so valid: "I am never alone in this chaos I have learned to ingest"...impeccably strong. It's so great to read you again! You've been missed!!!! Hiiiii! :)
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