Kim Rodrigues Poet Free verse

Guardian of Lost Souls

she bleeds deep inside -
a cavern of stalagmites.
her warm heart plunges
into an echoing abyss.

5/4/2019
Liberum Divisa Poetry Contest
Sponsor - Gregory Barden

A SNOW QUEEN TALE
Posted on 6/29/2018

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Andrea Dietrich May 28, 2019 at 5:48 PM Congrats for your win with this outstanding work, Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 28, 2019 at 10:20 PM Thank you, Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong May 25, 2019 at 7:16 PM A profound piece Kim. Beautifully expressed! Congratulations on your win Kim! xxoo Kim Rodrigues May 28, 2019 at 10:20 PM Thank you, Connie!

Eve Roper May 24, 2019 at 2:26 PM Beautiful verse, congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Eve Kim Rodrigues May 24, 2019 at 7:31 PM Thanks, Eve!

William Kelii Kekaula May 8, 2019 at 1:06 AM Oh succinctly brilliant, Aloha William... Kim Rodrigues May 8, 2019 at 7:12 AM Thanks, William! Aloha!

Panagiota Romios May 6, 2019 at 11:26 AM Beautifully done Panagiota Kim Rodrigues May 7, 2019 at 6:25 AM Thank you, Panagiota!

Kurt Ravidas May 5, 2019 at 4:58 PM May I join Robert's comment, please :3 I would like to add a few brief words of my own, though: you amaze me with the depth of your imagery, Kim. Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2019 at 9:31 PM Thank you, Kurt! :)

Andrea Dietrich May 5, 2019 at 3:51 PM oh wow, this is NICE!! really really nice. It puts me in mind of the cave nearby my town where there is salagmite that is in the form of a long heart!! Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2019 at 9:27 PM Thanks so much, Andrea! :)

Robert Lindley May 5, 2019 at 8:02 AM Power, fine imagery and great depth in such a short piece! Bravo..... Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2019 at 9:20 PM Thank you, Robert! :)

Silent One May 5, 2019 at 6:32 AM A short form, but so emotive.. Very well done Kim.. Kim Rodrigues May 5, 2019 at 7:02 AM Thank you, dear Silent!