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Guardian of Lost Souls

she bleeds deep inside - a cavern of stalagmites. her warm heart plunges into an echoing abyss. 5/4/2019 Liberum Divisa Poetry Contest Sponsor - Gregory Barden A SNOW QUEEN TALE Posted on 6/29/2018

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/28/2019 5:48:00 PM

Congrats for your win with this outstanding work, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2019 10:20:00 PM

Thank you, Andrea!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/25/2019 7:16:00 PM

A profound piece Kim. Beautifully expressed! Congratulations on your win Kim! xxoo

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/28/2019 10:20:00 PM

Thank you, Connie!

Eve Roper

Date: 5/24/2019 2:26:00 PM

Beautiful verse, congratulations on your 3rd place win. Hugs Eve

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/24/2019 7:31:00 PM

Thanks, Eve!

Hilo Poet

Date: 5/8/2019 1:06:00 AM

Oh succinctly brilliant, Aloha William...

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/8/2019 7:12:00 AM

Thanks, William! Aloha!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 5/6/2019 11:26:00 AM

Beautifully done Panagiota

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/7/2019 6:25:00 AM

Thank you, Panagiota!

Kurt Ravidas

Date: 5/5/2019 4:58:00 PM

May I join Robert's comment, please :3 I would like to add a few brief words of my own, though: you amaze me with the depth of your imagery, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 9:31:00 PM

Thank you, Kurt! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/5/2019 3:51:00 PM

oh wow, this is NICE!! really really nice. It puts me in mind of the cave nearby my town where there is salagmite that is in the form of a long heart!!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 9:27:00 PM

Thanks so much, Andrea! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 5/5/2019 8:02:00 AM

Power, fine imagery and great depth in such a short piece! Bravo.....

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 9:20:00 PM

Thank you, Robert! :)

Silent One

Date: 5/5/2019 6:32:00 AM

A short form, but so emotive.. Very well done Kim..

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/5/2019 7:02:00 AM

Thank you, dear Silent!