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Guardian Angel

Floating in a dreamscape of some brightly colored wonder. Drops me down on bended knee and sets my thoughts asunder. In darkest night I've waited thus and kept watch on the sky. Hoping for the fluttering wings soft as a baby's cry. Reaching from the joyful heights, at times the depths of sorrow. I'm sure she's out there vigilantly guarding my tomorrow. When circumstance spins me around and tries to knock me out I'll stand up strong just knowing that my angel is about.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/12/2012 3:34:00 PM
Such beautiful poetry. Nothing short of Art. Hugs Michael
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Date: 2/12/2012 3:09:00 PM
Nice words and verses in this poem. Just correct two small errors: Get rid of one "s" in your word "assunder". Also, "vigilant" should be presented as "vigilantly". You need the adverb as opposed to the adjective.
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Date: 2/12/2012 2:51:00 PM
Deb,, nice to see you here... nice to have someone watching us... enjoyed..pd
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Deb Wilson
Date: 2/12/2012 3:08:00 PM
thanks pd I am at my friends house using his computer

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