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6/14/2025 for For The Story Poetry Contest sponsored by Suzette Richards

Come on champ, do it for the story, for metaphor and allegory. Get away from me. Are you cracked? In all your stories, I get whacked. Give me some space with that cattle prod, you frustrated Marquis De Sade. Oops-a-daisy, there goes your head. Alas, poor thing, you’re tragically dead.

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Date: 6/15/2025 9:45:00 AM
Love it. Great take on her prompt.
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David Crandall
Date: 6/15/2025 6:58:00 PM
Thanks Andrea!
Date: 6/14/2025 3:38:00 PM
Funny David. Suzie should like it
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David Crandall
Date: 6/14/2025 4:09:00 PM
Thanks Tom. I was trying to match the vibe of her contest rules.

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