Grumbler

Woe to the ones with a sour attitude
Those who grumble in mumbled words so rude
Their poems sour the air
When one wrote of the 'Herr'
I've grown tired of this silly childish feud

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Lindsay Laurie

Date: 12/14/2021 4:16:00 PM

Hello Jenna ... wise words of wisdom. The oxygen thieves need to take a chill pill - thank you Jenna - Lindsay

Jan Allison

Date: 12/14/2021 2:48:00 PM

aww Jenna its shame I have come back to see the issues rearing their ugly heads once again, the negativity and vitriol have got to stop:-( hugs Jan xx

Mark Koplin

Date: 12/13/2021 4:48:00 PM

I think there is a “trail” of turds grumbling Lol

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2021 7:10:00 PM

At least one large one

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 12/12/2021 11:08:00 PM

I grumble because when I write a good but a trifle long story, every one ignores it. So should I write useless haiku since I'm not much good at them?

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/13/2021 2:01:00 AM

Some people don’t want to take the time to read a lengthy poem. Their loss to miss out on great poetry.

Ilene Bauer

Date: 12/12/2021 4:16:00 PM

good one, jenna! i'm finding it so dispiriting to keep reading all this vitriol. why can't people just keep nasty comments to themselves? it doesn't help anyone at all...

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2021 5:05:00 PM

I have tried to remain distant, but some things must be addressed when my character and religion are attacked.

Voodoo Child

Date: 12/12/2021 1:58:00 PM

Okay, but I’ve got a question, are you twelve? If you’re so offended and outraged WHY do you and others keep reading her posts and, more importantly, keep writing your retorts in some sort of schoolyard spat. We get it, it’s like watching Mean Girls lol. Apart from your equally silly besties on this site I think it’s fair to say that this “feud” has become tiresome to the rest of us. Can we expect another tirade tomorrow or will you just move on?

Voodoo Child
Date: 12/13/2021 4:45:00 AM

When I joined up I got a few soupmails warning me about the crèche mentality of some members but I didn't expect this. And who is Keith for goodness sakes? Forget it, I couldn't care less. I've got better ways to spend my time.

L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/12/2021 9:52:00 PM

You were tiresome, Keith, the minute you hit the site under a new name. Why can't you get a life? If you don't like our posts, don't read them. It's that simple. Obviously, you love the "feud," as you put it. But, remember, it's not a feud, it's a fight for the integrity of this site, which you obviously care nothing about. You only show up here to stir more of your crap! Enough for you!

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2021 5:48:00 PM

Guess who is his biggest fan.

Mark Koplin
Date: 12/12/2021 5:23:00 PM

Why did you change your name you coward. We know who you are.

Mark Koplin
Date: 12/12/2021 5:17:00 PM

Hey voodoo child, i think it’s time you go lay by your dish and stay the hell away from Jenna. What did she do to you to warrant your big mouth opening here?

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2021 5:02:00 PM

If you find my writings and those of my friends silly, why then do you read us and bother commenting? Tiresome tirades must be to your liking. And from the mindset of one who calls himself a voodoo child, you choose to compare us to mean girls?

Alexis Y.

Date: 12/12/2021 12:03:00 PM

Hi Jena, This place is not for sour attitudes. It’s a place to write and share poetry. Anything else is uncalled for. I echo what Tom said;-) Alexis

Jenna Logan
Date: 12/12/2021 1:00:00 PM

Yep. That’s the way it should be here, but a few rotten apples are trying to spread their mold among poets. Thank you. Alexis.