Grows the Night

Grows The Night


Grows the night, hours of slow sweeping pains

Moonlit views gifting no true delight,

A vassal of sad sorrows and woes

I seeking life's relief Fate denies

Grows the night, shadows dancing about

Creaking doors and pitiless low moans

Vestiges of weeping, shattered hearts

Trepidation reigns as, grows the night.


6/10/2020
Repeat The Phrase Poetry Contest
Verse poetry form only.
Sponsored by: Nette Onclaud
Chosen, "grows the night"
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Date: 6/13/2020 7:20:00 PM
This is a really beautiful and heartfelt write Robert. Congratulations on your win :)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2020 7:03:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Was a blessing to have been inspired to write that poem. God bless..
Date: 6/13/2020 7:14:00 PM
wow, AWEsome work, Robert. Congrats on a well deserved win.
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2020 7:01:00 AM
THAN YOU MY FRIEND. Always an honor to compose for a contest that so inspires me. God bless.
Date: 6/13/2020 12:43:00 PM
beautifully dark, robert...congrats on your high win in my contest...huggs
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2020 6:54:00 AM
Thank you my friend. An true honor for my poem to be so selected. God bless..
Date: 6/10/2020 9:17:00 PM
Intriguing poem for me tonight, as the night grows for me peace settles in as the beast has finally gone to sleep. The yang to your yin ;), Great write Robert! My best to you in the contest. xomo (Maureen!)
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Robert Lindley
Date: 6/14/2020 6:53:00 AM
Thank you my friend. Let the calm and beauty in life soothe your spirit and gentle heart. God bless.
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